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[原创] [原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

[这个贴子最后由香雪玉公主在 2004/11/16 02:37pm 第 1 次编辑]

I sat into the armchair beside the fire, watching James talked to Sirius closely. My best friends Mia and Brittany are busy making my hair—tomorrow, are the big time for both me and James: Our wedding day.
James looked so anxious and so excited. He’s never been this excited before, as far as I know, and we’re classmates since 11. I told Brittany to give me our photo book, and my thoughts flew back to first grade…
“Hey, who’s that girl?” a boy asked, pointing at me, his dark hair was the messiest hair I’ve ever seen. I frowned, that was absolutely rude.
“Oh, Evans, Lily Evans.” another boy stood beside him answered, shrugged.
“Who are you?” Mia raised an eyebrow.
“Sirius Black. And this is my cool mate James Potter.” The boy introduced them selves, I felt totally sick.
“Go away!” I shouted irritably, but I notice that the guy who called James keeps looking at me, his face covered with a weird dreamily look.
“Oh, why, though? We are probably at same house…at least, I hope so.” James made a face.
“Who would want to be in the same house with YOU!” Brittany snapped, close the door behind us.
“Those boys are totally gross.” Mia said.
“Oh sure they are.” I groaned.
Our trip is fun, after all. Time fly by, it’s the time for the Sorting.
“Anderson, Joanne!”
“SLYTHERINE!”
“Ankers, Alexander!”
“HUFFLEPUFF!”
“Black, Sirius!”
“Hoping he’s in any house but Gryffindor.” smirked Brittany, I nodded for agreement.
“GRYFFINDOR!” the sorting hat shouted.
“Oh no!” I cried in a great disappointment, that result that probably means I will be in a same house with that little brat (actually, well, I don’t know if I am in Gryffindor or not but, I think I am. Before I met Mia and Brittany, I don’t know anything about Sorting or different houses…stuff like that. I am a muggle-born, so, anyway)
“Bresberg, Sylvia!”
“SLYTHERINE!”
“Coach, Malcolm!”
“HUFFLEPUFF!”
“Danderlica, Mia!”
“GRYFFINDOR!”
I shouted and cheered, today maybe not too bad after all.
“Domstad, Gary!”
“HUFFLEPUFF!”
“Evans, Lily!”
Oh, right, this is it; I told my self, go for it.
Professor McGonagall put the Sorting Hat on my head, I hold my breath, wait for the answer.
“GRYFFINDOR!”
“Yeah!” Mia smiled brightly at me; she even stood up from the Gryffindor table.
“Gransterk Brittany!”
“GRYFFINDOR!”
“Well done, Brittany!” I grinned, clapping.
“Let’s just hope that Potter guy won’t get in to Gryffindor!” Brittany said hopefully.
“Uh-huh.” I nodded.
    We looked at the staff table, Professor Dumbledore, of course, sat in the centre; beside him is a empty seat, I guess it’s Professor McGonagall’s seat; on another side is Professor Sprout( Mia told me).
    “Hey, Lily, it’s that Potter guy!” Brittany elbowed me, pointing at the hat. He is grinning proudly.
“GRYFFINDOR!” the Sorting Hat shouted.
“Oh no!” I cried out loudly during the applause.
“Great, really great.” Mia moaned to James, he is smiling at me.
“So, Evans, we are classmate. Hoping to be your most loyal servant.” He bowed deeply, I snorted, pushed him to his “lovely” friend Black.
Afterwards, Brittany told me that Potter had a major crush on me. I felt terrible for my self; that little jerk keeps doing hexes down at the hall at people(he’s really smart, even though he is only a first grade, he knew a lot spells), and making fun of other people, especially poor Severus Snape. All right, he’s a Slytherine, but… I felt totally sick of Potter’s action; Mia and Brittany felt the same way as well. Okay, if I don’t want to date with him, what will he do to me?
“Calm down, girl,” Mia shrugged, “He likes you, he won’t do mean things to you.”
I groaned; I just hate him so so much.
I grinned when I thought about this part; James changes a lot, he’s very nice to everyone, even Snape. I felt happy hanging out with him; he is funny and always tries to make me laugh. Oh, what a boy…
“Man, this is hot.” Mia moaned. It’s nearly summer and it’s almost the time for our N.E.W.Ts test. Even though we can’t go out for sunshine and ice cream and Butterbeer, we still can feel that dry, hot weather. You know, seventh grade really is a totally busy year; Mia, who always wearing make ups (not those silly Muggle one! It’s magical and very expensive), now she doesn’t even have time doing her nails.
“Actually, um, Lily, I guess Potter isn’t that bad after all.” said Brittany uncomfortably.
“What? Brittan—“
“Um…eh…he, he’s actually pretty, eh, not bad now. Like, he, I think you should give him a chance.”
“There is no way I will be dating with him!” I said blankly.
“But, come on, just give it a try, if he’s a jerk after all, you can just ignore him!” Brittany looked at me straight in to my eyes.
“What’s wrong with you today?” I swallowed hard.
“Nothing. But, Lily, I knew that you are nice to Snape, but he’s in Slytherine and he calls you mud-blood! Now, why are you been so rude to a boy that totally likes you? I knew that Potter was rude before, but now, he is not!” Brittany shrugged.
“What’s the big deal with you if I hate Potter?” I said coolly.
“No, it’s just, I think he’s your type.” said Brittany unsurely.
“What do you think, Mia?” I asked.
“It wouldn’t hurt if you go out with him, right?”
“But my only feeling about him is hate!” I cried out loudly.
“Come on, Miss Evans, “Brittany said, “give him a chance. All right? Trust me, he changes a lot.”
“Okay, I guess.” I sighed, how am I going to get along with a freak?
“Evans, you are the most gorgeous girl in the world!” James cried in great amazement, after Mia told him that I will go out with him.
I raised an eyebrow.
“Eh…no, actually, you are the most boring girl in the world.” he added after he saw the look on my face.
I laughed, he’s not that bad after all, I decide.
“You know what, I really need to thank you guys. “ Mia came over with a bottle of eye shadows, I smiled at her.
“Right. Its Brittany’s idea to make you two a happy couple.” Mia grinned back.
“You made a right choice, girl,” Brittany beamed down at me.
“Li-ly, you need to get some sleep! You can’t have black circles around you eyes in the wedding!” My mother cried.
The only thing I felt sorry is my sister, Petunia, who think I am a totally freak. Oh well, she married with a Muggle, Vernon Dursley. Who cares? With James on my side now…everything is not important after all.
“Sweetheart, come here, get some sleep.” James kissed me on the cheek.
“Okay, James.” I kissed back, both of us went up stairs…
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OK啦,中文翻出来了,请看:
莉莉:詹姆,我生命中的男孩
发在哈利·波特与凤凰社了,嘻,偶不知道能不能再偷一个精。。。不过中文比较短~
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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

公主加油!!
很好的!!
但是,一想到哈利一出生他俩就完了,真是痛苦!!
顶!!
Look...............at.............me...........
请记住的遗言

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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

哟!很不错啊!精华奖励!好久没有原创文了~写得很不错~~~加油!


HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第一集
HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第二集
[有声书]Far Away Over The Sea——JY献给萝林的有声书


Michael Scofield: If I were you I wouldn't mention that name again.
And then I'm gonna find out who's responsible for taking her life... and I'm taking theirs.
——For remembering the death of Sara Tencredi
Sara was alive! She will be back on 4th season!!! Nice!!!
Thought I might had just fallen in love with Severus Snape......
——For remembering the death of Severus Snape, and the Audiobook of HP7 is perfect! Loved it!

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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

是啊是啊,偶可要好好看~~~

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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

Hum.....
nice, it';s very good u know!
keep going!

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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

偶太感动了!5555555555555555555~~~~~~~~~~~~`
中文翻译還要过一下才能出來,我现在有一堆的考试,吐,所以动作会慢点。。。
汗,猛得发现FF的精华。。。偶以后多发几篇这样滴,看看还能不能偷几个精,溜了,8~
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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

你写的和罗琳的风格类似呢~好好的完整地看完了呢!真的很不错~~FF的精华是比较好得的~呵呵~继续努力啊!


HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第一集
HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第二集
[有声书]Far Away Over The Sea——JY献给萝林的有声书


Michael Scofield: If I were you I wouldn't mention that name again.
And then I'm gonna find out who's responsible for taking her life... and I'm taking theirs.
——For remembering the death of Sara Tencredi
Sara was alive! She will be back on 4th season!!! Nice!!!
Thought I might had just fallen in love with Severus Snape......
——For remembering the death of Severus Snape, and the Audiobook of HP7 is perfect! Loved it!

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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

不错!原创的吗?楼主的英文水平一定顶顶好.
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[原创]+[申精]Lily: James, the boy in my life

楼上,没有的事啦!偶是飘柔似雪发的那个文里才知道bier,汗。。。
大家去看一下中文的吧,提一下意见,偶翻译本来就不很在行~
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