[这个贴子最后由JUNEYEAH在 2004/09/10 07:39pm 第 1 次编辑]

[equote]Hello everybody!
As you may know that I am attending an English course which is for my future studies in LSE for my undergraduate degree.
We did timed writing and reading in class during this week, and I got my feedback today, I wanted to share the problems of my writing to you so you may learn some writing and reading study skills from it, and I hope it can help you with your academic writing and reading for the improvement of your English. Hope you can find this useful.
I will ask FF translators to translate my problems if you wanted to. OK so much for the talking, hope you can spot your own problems for the problems I had experienced. Thanks~~
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As I had told you that we';ve got a writing and reading assessment yesterday, and I got the feedback today. And the results was dispointing, ';cos I got so many weak points: old and new weak points... And I need to work really hard to overcome those difficulties, and it will be a big bunch of work for me to do.
My tutor (for the course) is saying that my problems are: 1.My writing on one subject is too specific, and I couldn';t analyse the question quite well, so it seems that I';m not answering the questions very well (and this is always my problems I found, so I think it is very true.). 2. I could not link the data I found with my article well enough, that';s the problem of my essay which I did yesterday.
My reading is even weaker, firstly is about my ability to give titles to a paragraph, and secondly is my vocabulary is too limited, thirdly, my reading ability is not good enough...
And the tutor also suggested me about what kind of situation I will experience in my undergraduate studies, and how I can acheive that, which I think it is really really useful, cos I need somebody to guide my through, and this is what I need before, but I actrually didn';t get it.
I need to work really hard from now on to prove my reading and writing abilities, which can enable me to get use to the life in my undergraduate studies.
I just want to tell my experiences of today to you, so I can feel better. I';m not feeling too sad about it now, ';cos I know that';s is my level and my problems, I really appreciate that my tutor can tell my that, so I got a general idea for how I can achieve it.

I will update the translation quite quickly~~ Thanks~~

wow, there';s so many things i should improve, too~~~