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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

[这个贴子最后由克莱尔在 2004/09/12 03:03am 第 6 次编辑]

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……
  Yeah, time really go fast, isn';t it?  I remeber once in June wake up in the morning by saying:"Is the end of June already?"  Well, yes, the school is over, that';s a good thing, I guess, but the sad part is say good bye to all my friends in school.  Unlike them, I';m not going to the same highschool as them, I know, is sad, but there';s nothing I can do about it other than saying good bye.  But here I';m not going to say anything about that, incase if I cry out, but here I';m going to talk about my most unforgettble thing that I';ve done during grade 7.  Well, is kind of looking back and see the thing I did, yeah, you can say that again.
  Well, before I start, I really want talk about this thing.  Well, if you know me, then you';ll know I don';t always tell people something that is personal about me.  Um, maybe my friends, I guess.  But well, what can I say, in this story there';s a lots of personal things about myself, and this is why I';ve had this idea for a long time and now I';m writing it.  So first of all, I hope you';ll enjoy it.  And as you know, Canada here is diffrent than China, like the people and a lots of things.  I guess somepeople won';t understand somepart of the story maybe, but if you like it, then that';s all I need.
Chaputer 1  The Grade 7 Dance (1)
  Yeah, somepeople really can';t hold on quiet for a sec, like the girl over there, Elizabeth.  Yeah, I know, I know, it is all her creazy idea.  You might don';t know what I';m taliking about, well, let me tell you then, is her, Elizbeth give the idea on our classmeeting about having a Grade 7 Dance, and I can';t believe that almost everyone in our class accept her idea.  Is everyone creazy?!  Well, it';s not that I don';t like this idea, but Dance?  With guys?  Oh no no no, I';m sure I won';t be asking the guys to go to the dance with me.  I don';t care what you';ll say,  but there';s no way I';m going to the dance.  No way!  And to be honest, I can see somegirls are really happy, I mean really---happy about this.  The minute Elizabeth tell the whole class her idea, some of the girls already start looking at the other guys, whispering.  Gosh, how stpuid.  But well, I can';t act like I don';t care about this dance, ';cause my best friend Jenny already beg me to go with her, so, I have no choice left.  Or do I?  No, I don';t.  But I guess I';ll still have Jenny around if there';s no guy ask me to dance.  I guess...
  At Lunch time, you can see some of the girls already start to ask the guys, well, the guys too.  
  But just when Jenny whispered in my ear:"So who do you want to go to the dance with?"  She asked, and I can feel my face turn red the minute she said it.  
  "Um, I';m not sure, actually, I don';t think any of the guys would ask me to the dance."  
  "Oh, come on, Claire, I already know you had a boyfriend before, so don';t act like some 7 years old coy girl, okay?"  
  "So who do you want to go with?"  I asked her back, I guess I';m little mad about her calling me a "coy girl".  
  "Well,"  now she';s speaking in a very low voice, I can barely hear anything."As you know, all the girls are going for Sam D. now." Sam D,?  Oh my god I hate that guy.  
  "What?!  Are thay blind?!  Why do they want to go with that guy?  Just because he';s popular?"  
  "Well, thatl';s some of the reason I guess."  Jenny said, with a smile on her face.  
  "Get that smile off your face."  I said to her, in case she';s day-dreaming.  
  "Well, you know, you are not so bad either."  She said to me."You know, guys think you are very cute."  
  "Yeah, right.  You don';t have to say this, Jenny.  If all you are trying to do is making me feel better."  I said it to her, smiled.  
  "No, honestly.  And do you know what?  SamW,(We have two "Sam';s in our class.)was looking at you when Elizabeth told her idea.  
  "Really?"  I try to not make my voice sound too excited.  
  "Well, if you could believe it.  But if you want to go with him, you';d better hurry up and make a move, cause I know somegirls are already started making their move."  
  "Give up, Jenny.  You know I';m not that kind of girl."  
  "Well, if I were you, I won';t be so stupid."  She said.  
  "Yeah, like I care about him.  Ha, no way."  But this isn';t the truth.  I like Sam W., Jenny knows it, I have a crush on him, but now I';m acting like I don';t care about him, not even a bit.  But there';s one thing I';m sure of, is that I';m not going to ask a guy to dance.  Yeah, there';s no way I';m doing that.  So now what can I do, waiting for Sam W. to ask me, I don';t think there';s much chance of it, I mean, he';s so popular and unlike the other popular guys, he is much nicer.  Oh, what can I do?
                                                                                                            To Be Continued……
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  Well, this is my frist time writing a long story in HP, I actually think this is very boring, but I hope you like it  :21: .  Wish, I mean~
                                                                                                                             Claire

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

好象有些多语法错误哦,楼主再修改一下吧
[img]http://image2.sina.com.cn/dongman/2004-11-29/U637P55T4D31937F117DT20041129101433.jpg[/img]

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

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下面引用由harryli2004/08/24 11:57am 发表的内容:
好象有些多语法错误哦,楼主再修改一下吧
Oh yeah, you';re right.  
But I';m too lazy to fix it today, I';ll do it sometime later……

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

hmm,存一下,慢慢看~~~ 现在用有限了~~~
是真实的吗? lol

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

I changed your order a little bit, it will help reading~~~
I have found some grammar mistakes, I think I';ll do it later~~~ lol

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

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下面引用由luxiaohui22004/08/25 01:00pm 发表的内容:
hmm,存一下,慢慢看~~~ 现在用有限了~~~
是真实的吗? lol
是啊,都是真实的呢……
汗~有些地方自己都不敢相信我自己曾经做过那样的事……
汗死~

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

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下面引用由luxiaohui22004/08/25 07:36pm 发表的内容:
I changed your order a little bit, it will help reading~~~
I have found some grammar mistakes, I think I';ll do it later~~~ lol
Oh, thanks for doing that...
Cause I';m too lazy to change it, so...
Well, just hope you like the story.

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

ah, I';m waiting for more~~~

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

Oh, my god~~
Almost forget, the school is gonna start soon...
By the way, I just saw Sam W. this Monday...

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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

so? what happened?

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