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You';ll see the sun shining.
When you look up,
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When you look up,
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When you look up,
You';ll see the clouds flapping.
When you look up,
You';ll see me smiling.
When you look up,
You';ll see the angel,
looking at you.
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Just one suggestion~~~ If you change when you look up and You';ll see a bit each time, then the poem will sounds be better each time~~ ^_^
Thanks~~

i know, but it';s bit hard, isn';t it?

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Just a little change of ';when you look up'; will be much better~~ ^_^

Thanks. The next time, I';ll pay attention.

Thanks ^_^
I';m sure you will make a big progress next time~~ ^_^
Thanks you~~

clever girl you are, keep up your good work!