（乱入中文）这种WS的脱线狗血是啥啊的东西就不要看了吧……XD。
所谓重在参与……以及（此物可做09年高考短文改错练习题。）
Eight years ago…
Hello~ I’m Point Yun.
I live on Treasure Box Lane 711#, Mushroom Street with my papa.
Our house is surrounded by the fence. Every day papa repairs the fence. ‘DANG~DANG~’. He also builds a shacks which looks like a jelly in the backyard . When I do something wrong, papa will lock me there. TAT.
Papa is always worried about my safety, but does not want to hurt my young soul's self-esteem. In fact, on the surface, he encourages me to action alone , but he always tracks me in silence: The school-Barbecue share -Supermarkets-Cakes housing - Home.
Papa has a strange hobby-- squatting at the corner, mourning. orz…
Papa said our home was so poor that we couldn't afford to eat. So I would be brought to the Queen SIMA`s(ha?) home. But I can always go home to see papa by bicycle ~
TU, I’m Point Yun, so.
Now…
En…I`m Point Yun’s papa.
From then on, my daughter…
Lens…
Laundry, cooking, wiping the floor…that is Double Point’s life.[TAT
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