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[原创] [FF庆生活动1]Never alone. 某人荒唐梦呓...冗长,慎入

本主题由 luxiaohui2 于 2008-9-1 02:24 AM 分类

[FF庆生活动1]Never alone. 某人荒唐梦呓...冗长,慎入

如果你还是入了....那么...请无视我的无聊,请无视故事的荒谬,请无视99%会出现的语法错误和拼写错误,以及请无视我的严重偏题.
最后....HUI...我还是来交文了...而且比你早!!!
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There was once a little bear. She was not a real bear, but a toy bear of a girl called Sarah, and Sarah was a ten-year old girl.
“You are a big girl now. Don’t ask me for toys as birthday gifts again.” said Sarah’s mother before Sarah’s tenth birthday. Sarah nodded, and left the store following her mother, with eyes still fixing on the bear.
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“Hello, this is Ella.”
“Hi, Granny Ella! How are you?” shouted Sarah excitedly on the phone.
“Good. I just call you to ask what you want for birthday.”
“What?” Sarah never thought about a second person who could give her a birthday gift, “I… I don’t know.”
“Well, if you say so, I can only guess.”
Ella was her best and only friend, and she was a very old woman. It sounded incredible, but it was true. Sarah’s mother was a single mother; her father left them before she was born. In order to feed Sarah and herself, Sarah’s mother changed job again and again, and they moved from one place to another.
“Mom, can you stop changing jobs? I won’t mind it if your salary is not very high. I just want to stay in one place a little longer and have a friend!” Last time when her mother told her they were moving again, Sarah cried.
“Darling, I promise, it’s the last moving.” sighed her mother.
“You say it every time.” Sarah murmured while throwing her stuff into a huge box.
But finally she found that even if she could stay in one place for a long time, she still couldn’t have friends. All her classmates had their own friends, but she was totally a stranger. Tears ran out of her eyes when she was sitting in a bookstore near her new home one day, reading alone.
“Do you need help, honey?” Through her tears, Sarah saw an ugly old woman sitting down in front of her.
“No.” Sarah said with pride.
“Honey, don’t be afraid to admit that you are lonely.” The old woman said softly.
“How do you know?”
“It’s in your eyes, my dear.”
For the first time, something deep in Sarah’s heart was touched. Sarah looked into the old woman’s face, full of wrinkles, but full of smile, too. But Sarah didn’t discover the oddness in her smile.
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Then, Sarah had a friend, her only friend. Every day, they met in the bookstore, and Sarah called the old woman “Granny Ella”.
To some degree, Granny Ella was a weird old woman. She was single, and when she laughed, she looked like a vulture; she knew millions of interesting stories that all children might be interested in, but no child in the neighborhood wanted to be near her, except for Sarah. And since the day Sarah met Granny Ella, no children seemed to like to be with her, either.
“I don’t mind that, they weren’t my friends from the beginning.” said Sarah to Granny Ella on her tenth birthday party. Only two people were in the party, Sarah, and Granny Ella. Even Sarah’s mother was out for work.

“Sorry, Darling, I must go.” After baking the birthday cake for her daughter, Sarah’s mother ran out of their house.

“Sarah, I haven’t given you your birthday gift.” Granny Ella said it when Sarah was eating her cake.
“Umm?” Sarah didn’t expect for any gift, even though she remembered Granny Ella had mentioned it once.
“Your birthday gift.” She took out a box and gave it to Sarah, who had an extremely surprised expression on her face.
A toy bear, the one she saw in the store, the one her mom didn’t want to buy her.
Again, Sarah burst into tears. She buried herself in Granny Ella’s arms.
“Thank you, Granny Ella.” She could say nothing more.
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And after that, the bear had never leave Sarah. Sarah took it everywhere.
“See that Sarah girl with her stupid bear?” “Yeah. She’s no better than the bear. Haha.”…..
Sarah could often hear these words from her classmates, but she always ignored them.
Several days before Halloween.
“Let’s vote for the place of our Halloween Party.” The teacher announced in class.
“I vote for Tom’s house!” “Lydia’s house!” “My house is the best!” “No, you should go to mine!”…..
Sarah just kept in silence, and reading.
“Probably Granny Ella’s house is the best for you. She is a witch, and her house is a tomb for lonely children.” Someone is whispering in Sarah’s ears. She turned her head, and saw an evil smile in Tom’s face, the most proud boy in their class. Sarah turned back, and hugged her bear more tightly.
Something happened that night.
Sarah heard her mother’s voice when she was back from work. “In the name of God, come here, Sarah!”
“What’s up?” Sarah saw the fear in her mother’s face.
“Keep away from that old witch, darling,” Her mother was trembling.
“Who?”
“The one you call her ‘Granny Ella’.” She held her daughter’s hands tightly, “One of my co-workers told me today, she said she killed children.”
“She is NOT a witch!” Sarah took her hands out from her mother’s and shouted angrily.
“Then I think I must lock you in the house!”
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From that day on, Sarah was locked in her room. Every day when her mother came to see her, she shouted to her mother. “She’s my only friend!”
“But I don’t want you to die!”

“She can’t be a witch, can she?” The day before Halloween, Sarah talked to her bear. No matter what, she couldn’t believe that. She needed to ask Granny Ella herself.
That night, she climbed out of her window, and left home. But she didn’t know where to go. She even didn’t know where Granny Ella lived. Suddenly---
“Sarah! What are you doing there?” Sarah stopped immediately. And she saw, to her surprise, Granny Ella was walking towards her.
“I’m looking for you.” Sarah tried to keep her voice calm.
“Me? I thought you forget me. You didn’t come to meet me these days.”
“Yes, but….Granny Ella?” In the ghosts like lamp light Sarah saw Granny Ella’s face a bit distorted. Is that her illusion?
“What? I’d like to know what you are alone outside in this late night.”
“Forget it. Are you a witch, Granny Ella? They say you are.”
To Sarah’s surprise again, she saw Granny Ella smiling to her. “Yes, I am.” She was even more surprised about her answer.
Sarah backed off.
“Don’t be afraid. I’m a witch who likes helping children.”
But Sarah just kept backing off in fear.
“Sarah, you don’t believe me? I’m your best friend!” Sarah stopped.
“Do you want to come to my house for a cup of tea? I remember you’ve never been there…. since you can’t sleep.”
I don’t know whether it was out of curiosity or trust, Sarah followed her.



[ 本帖最后由 小唐的糖 于 2008-8-20 12:15 PM 编辑 ]
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Granny Ella’s house was at the end of the town. That town was an old town; there were lots of old houses. But Sarah had never seen a house older than Granny Ella’s.
It was big and caliginous. Wind seemed to blow stronger here than any other place of the town. Strangely, Sarah felt as if she had come to another world. But inside the house, it was warm and bright.
“Do you like it here?” asked Granny Ella.
Holding a cup of hot tea in Sarah’s hands, she looked around. “Ye..yes.” Actually, Sarah didn’t know. Something was strange here, she could feel, but she couldn’t tell. Granny Ella seemed to love cats very much. There were lots of small sculptures of cats in her house, and some of them were really….weird. She was really a witch?
“What are you thinking?” Granny Ella’s voice drew her back.
“No..nothing.” said Sarah.
“Do you still feel lonely, honey?” Sarah didn’t answer.
“Dear girl, I saw that in your eyes, always. The loneliness hasn’t ever left you.” Sarah still didn’t answer.
“You consider me as your friend. But in your deep heart, you want a friend at your age, someone from your classmates.” Sarah began to weep, but Granny Ella continued, “But your classmates tease you because your friend is me. Sarah, you are not happy.”
Sarah couldn’t deny that, and she couldn’t stop her tears.
“Do you want to be never alone?” asked Granny Ella.
Silence. Minutes later, Sarah nodded.
“Come with me.” Granny Ella stood up. But Sarah didn’t move.
“I’m a witch, remember? I can help you.”
Sarah hesitated for some obvious reason, but she finally stood up.
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The back yard of Granny Ella’s house was splendid. Roses red like blood were singing in the moonlight. Shadows of the trees covered the ground, softly. Something glittery which Sarah couldn’t tell their shape were flying among the branches of trees, for a moment, she thought they are tree elves. She heard about them in Granny Ella’s stories. They were true.
“You can stay here, forever.” said Granny Ella. Moonlight shined on her face, there was greed in her eyes. But Sarah didn’t see. She was totally lost in this dreamland. She walked into the center of the yard. There was a circle, a circle made of----tombs. Smile disappeared on Sarah’s face, she turned back, and she wanted to leave.
“That will be your bed, my dear.” Granny Ella stopped her, “you should go to bed now.” I’ve said before, when Granny Ella was smiling, she was like a vulture.
“Let me go! I want to go home!” Sarah cried, now she believed. She wished she had listened to her mom.
“Too late.” Granny Ella dragged Sarah to one of the tombs. It was a big one, and a beautiful one. On the cover of the tomb, naughty elves were painted, and surrounded with flowers.
“NOOOOOO!!!!” Sarah began to scream. But at the end of the town, no one could hear her.
The tomb was opened. There was already a child…..sleeping there. He was more like sleeping than dead. His face was as tender as the moonlight, and his lips were as red as roses, and, he was smiling.
“He will be your friend, forever. And they are all your friends.” Granny Ella pointed to the rest tombs.
Sarah began to cry.
“Be quiet my girl, it doesn’t hurt.” Granny Ella touched Sarah’s face, and Sarah felt so cold and helpless. “After this you’ll be never alone. I promise.”
A moment later, Sarah stopped crying. She was now lying in the tomb, beside the little boy. But she felt, she was floating in the air. And then, she caught her last sight of the moon.
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Probably you will think that Sarah just had a nightmare, but it was not a dream.
The next day, when Sarah’s mom came into Sarah’s bedroom, she saw only her daughter’s beloved little bear, but Sarah was not in bed.
It must be her illusion; she thought she saw the bear was smiling at her, just now. Sarah never came back since then.

And don’t forget, today is Halloween.

“Trick or treat!” There was a knock on the door of Granny Ella’s house.
“Hi, my dear!” She opened the door with a smile on her face, “We have more candies for a new friend this year, and do you know who she is?”
“Yes!” said the children, and they pulled a girl out of their crowd, and that was…Sarah.

[ 本帖最后由 小唐的糖 于 2008-8-20 07:27 PM 编辑 ]

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我先占好了。。。
然后慢慢看。。。

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占。
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“Do you need help, honey?”

“Don’t be afraid. I’m a witch who likes helping children.”

“I can help you.”
于是善良的我联想到对萝莉下手的XX之人。=w=

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以及我就不知道为何对那个后院产生了好感……
[为何我感觉此巫婆和我的性质差不多?OTL。] [反白,慎看。]

[ 本帖最后由 纯良书生 于 2008-8-20 01:34 PM 编辑 ]
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鉴于对某糖纠结之心的充分了解,咱家在此保证,此人绝对就是那Ella。。。各位小朋友们,晚上睡觉盖好被子啊。。。

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原帖由 幻血祭 于 2008-8-19 23:33 发表
鉴于对某糖纠结之心的充分了解,咱家在此保证,此人绝对就是那Ella。。。各位小朋友们,晚上睡觉盖好被子啊。。。
天杀的你这个人,我怎么居然让你活到了现在??

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于是我来指了。。糖亲你让我太自卑叻。。
这么有内容的一个故事。。并且极其有爱的灵异感。。再看看我那个LOLI纠结的自言自语。。泪奔。
给我亲爱的某某。。我很想把那些海洋都抽干了。

夜深千帐灯。BLOG。

>>http://blog.sina.com.cn/lilysiriussun

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原帖由 笙散 于 2008-8-20 19:19 发表
于是我来指了。。糖亲你让我太自卑叻。。
这么有内容的一个故事。。并且极其有爱的灵异感。。再看看我那个LOLI纠结的自言自语。。泪奔。
不许泪奔跑掉...抱住...
你的自言自语至少让我看到一个可爱的笙妹妹...(为什么我觉得就是和你写的LILY那样可爱= =||)
哪像我这么纠结...TAT

[ 本帖最后由 小唐的糖 于 2008-8-20 07:42 PM 编辑 ]

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不知为什么sarah让我想起了在初中时期孤单,被同学排挤的我
当我看到Granny Ella给了Sarah 那个小熊时,我已经全心全意相信了Granny Ella , 不管结局如何。是的,早就知道Sarah的生日礼物会是那只熊,但还是觉得那么温暖。
我太单纯了吧
someday I'll find it, the rainbow connection, the lovers the dreamers and me.

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孩子你果然很傻,很单纯.
不过其实没什么不好的.

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