第一次尝试英文同人，望大家指教。
5 L; K  ~( b) I2 a3 [" \! `& h最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。<English>
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7 H* S* @0 D( u) ^$ m0 A6 P哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter1.Long Long Ago
+ ^, E3 c1 l( e3 H哈利波特爱好者论坛They said they were together,
6 W# m/ o' o. h  pAfter all those days in the moonlight,哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter8 P& D0 l4 p9 _* z$ v5 }
Transforming and wondering around in Hogsmeade.
- X) q; a' M$ ?; Xwww.hpfans.netThere reflects four long shadows- on the ground.
5 N* Y' T9 X, Z最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。They thought they would be like that for ever," G% f1 @$ e9 H/ q) Q& E
Until one of them fell in love with a girl.
( E% F% m0 n' P$ h% Y- Q最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。The girl was nice- 'course she was nice,
# b( m# [1 P3 v( bwww.hpfans.netThey got married, and had a child.最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。. @7 L! ?7 o) }8 _. t+ S( E
This shall be a good ending- you may think,! Y  |- {/ I5 ~
But thing weren't like that for ever.
/ ~6 _  h. {+ P5 t0 M$ EThe couple were killed by a wizard,) V: Y& D7 O- C: E/ q1 c7 Z
The three who left cried with pain- at least it seemed like that.哈利波特爱好者论坛3 w% ^: Q. d4 {! m1 B  j% {
But, it was said that one of them betrayed the couple,
1 y) y3 x& W  i1 I2 x" mWhich caused the death.
# k, g9 h( Z% BHis name was SIRIUS BLACK.
4 r5 W8 K, T  E& n" g9 a! `Black was sent to Azkaban while another friend
9 n3 Z* [: w' D  _6 oPeter Pettigrew was dead when he tried to kill Black.
- z( i) v1 F( L2 T哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotterThis was the day they began to fall apart.
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9 W! v& E8 Q$ dwww.hpfans.netTo be continued--2 ?- Z) V6 A, i4 r, O* u% f8 ~

' ^# W! [6 a* a4 f" |[ 本帖最后由 忆合 于 2007-11-8 08:43 PM 编辑 ]

又是to be countinued，郁闷啊~* L) a5 E# R& C: l
不过好快啊，刚催完就发了。恩，不错~继续继续，英文的风格很好，就是情节发展的太快了吧？

不要听Sun某人胡说，我不想写长篇啊。哈利波特爱好者论坛! l) f8 z6 H# ^1 i9 q. g

6 b/ G% m& _. z) G+ a' S[ 本帖最后由 忆合 于 2007-10-28 06:15 PM 编辑 ]

没有没有，纯属个人意愿啦~继续继续，短篇我也顶！

某天蓝你过分吧~我的沙发~忆合小朋友还是这么少啊~加油哦~

某忆合我很郑重地说现在还不到三周月，没有你这么隐藏沙发的吧~并且不许在帖子里暴露某S的个人信息~你可以编辑成Sun么~我不管你~某忆合的英文写作还是在我可望而不可即的远方~某天蓝我的沙发沙发沙发沙发~
% P( ^' K" w4 I. i- y" |哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter
$ G, v' u: g% A) D  W& p最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。[ 本帖最后由 肆安 于 2007-10-18 09:04 PM 编辑 ]

咳咳，不用吧？某SUN已经怨念一整天了，就不要玷污哈爱这纯洁的地方了吧？
, _+ ]3 S, j; W& BPS不是把地板和地下室都给你了么？知足吧？房顶这最后一个位置我就不客气了啊:lol

2. Sirius Black哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter2 J. o9 c9 I0 b' b
It was calmer than ever in the next few years,
: [! @( |2 R1 r5 |  }www.hpfans.netPeople were out without protection,
, Q3 D, L  F' p哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotterBecause the Dark Lord had gone.
6 T' q2 ]* m; W: h* k" pwww.hpfans.netEveryone looked happy and cheerful,
1 F8 k+ q& C& e最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。Except the prisoner Sirius Black.最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。; g: @* J( o; G6 g
Actually Black was awake,
$ J$ m  \) E) m& H9 JEven though the Dementors were surrounding him everyday.
5 \) a& o1 G+ k" |# Vwww.hpfans.netHe could remember everything,
' r* T7 X& A4 P8 w* m哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotterEspecially James’s note in Godric Hollows:
) R; Z) r7 k% C哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotterI’ll be back to thee.
4 v# `0 h8 U0 O+ w: f, _- R! \% Mwww.hpfans.netHis mind was clear, and it was important,$ }- e8 @( K$ L7 s* E1 P
Because he was the only one who knew the truth.
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Black was out of Azkaban., D* L' i' I* B0 H, v
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The Ministry was searching for him, but he wasn’t found.哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter# H+ j. i" a0 c7 g  Z$ ?5 H
Everyone thought that
; ~# O7 e: H; R- i2 JBlack was after the child Harry Potter. www.hpfans.net/ n  `5 W9 A) x# X3 o) t% M
But they didn’t know one thing:
; @' {. w% E3 g+ z& I8 E' cWhen the dusk fell, Black appeared as a man,
5 D4 i: g2 I: Z% u* I  [& K最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。When the sun rose, Black appeared as a dog.1 D1 u& w2 b* ~& f# |( h" g
A Black dog.
0 F1 M* r* Z+ Y* g6 Cwww.hpfans.netFluffy,
6 x3 l' H. t2 }: N哈利波特爱好者论坛But sharp.最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。4 I, c+ p/ s0 M1 u

7 O" @, Z' C) F+ ]最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。4. In the Shrieking Shack
: w$ ]7 @- b/ R# u, \1 W0 ^www.hpfans.net‘Remus, I’ve caught him!’
5 J& e4 ^8 c2 o  Y! w‘I know.’3 x, J- ]  `9 u6 p/ a
It reminded him of something before.$ M4 J5 d' `5 W; A
        ‘James, Remus is a werewolf.’哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter! {1 S" k- {0 O: b9 j% w
        ‘I know.’
( U8 K7 n/ R. N哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter        You always knew, didn’t you?最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。6 ^* i( z, N2 z$ c6 s% f8 V: p
‘Let’s kill him.’www.hpfans.net5 Z  x9 ]* h. Q
‘Right.’
) g! j9 g5 P, E% {8 j* Iwww.hpfans.net‘No!’哈利波特爱好者论坛+ _) B* v2 e; Q' \
Sirius turned, looking disappointed and surprised.
" k( Q" q& _2 M4 s4 H‘Harry, this man is……’最棒的哈利波特专题大型中文网站，丰富、及时的新闻、图库、视频、同人、下载，还有热门的哈迷讨论区。这是你真正的魔法家园。& E2 u) Y0 v/ v2 q9 q- V7 f
‘I know who he is. We’ll send him to Azkaban.’: ~7 q3 A! _' _, G9 y. q; L' c4 ?* e4 c; N
Sirius stared, than smiled.哈利波特爱好者论坛4 K4 P- j- c# ^2 _+ C9 e
This means- Harry would have a godfather; Peter would be a prisoner;哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter' G5 l9 O* Y2 |$ [2 w, ]& i
And he……
, r+ C" P! l+ q1 H- b( mwww.hpfans.netHe would be with Harry, James’s son.哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter& Z: F( o' V! q" r) v  a9 d
It’s too good to be true.www.hpfans.net' D2 t' `2 R1 N5 O6 L8 M; C8 j

8 M: `1 `2 d- w6 \) HTo be continued--

Sofa~写得很好呢，支持哦~我冒着被灭的危险上哈爱~
# B# `- |. N1 K% g哈利波特,霍格沃兹,罗恩,赫敏,罗琳,harrypotter建议哈爱以后专开一个英文同人版面，在现在的图书馆英文内容似乎看的人都不是很多啊~

其实用英文写得也不错啊!!~!~@!#!@!#!