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[原创] Spring

Spring

Spring

Spring makes me dream of trees.

Trees make me dream of birds.

Birds make me dream of music.

Music make me dream of Symphonys.

Symphonys make me dream of happiness.

Happiness make me dream of spring.

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  • JUNEYEAH 金币 +10 原创作品,奖励支持~~+10加隆。 2007-4-14 08:15 PM

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挺有意思~~~10加隆奖励支持~~


HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第一集
HAP年度巨献:广播剧Living To Love You 第二集
[有声书]Far Away Over The Sea——JY献给萝林的有声书


Michael Scofield: If I were you I wouldn't mention that name again.
And then I'm gonna find out who's responsible for taking her life... and I'm taking theirs.
——For remembering the death of Sara Tencredi
Sara was alive! She will be back on 4th season!!! Nice!!!
Thought I might had just fallen in love with Severus Snape......
——For remembering the death of Severus Snape, and the Audiobook of HP7 is perfect! Loved it!

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有点像绕口令……

简短的诗更有淳朴的意味。
We're walking in the air.

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顶一下~
写的蛮好的~
虽然有一点短~
顶针的方法啊~
不错!
帝高阳之苗裔兮,朕皇考曰伯庸;
摄提贞于孟陬兮,惟庚寅吾以降;
皇览揆余于初度兮,肇锡余以嘉名;
名余曰正则兮,字余曰灵均;
纷吾既有此内美兮,又重之以修能;
扈江离与辟芷兮,纫秋兰以为佩;
汩余若将不及兮,恐年岁之不吾与;
朝搴[阝比]之木兰兮,夕揽洲之宿莽;
日月忽其不淹兮,春与秋其代序;
惟草木之零落兮,恐美人之迟暮;
不抚壮而弃秽兮,何不改乎此度?
乘骐骥以驰骋兮,来吾导夫先路。

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第一次写的,老师说我写得不错,就发上来了。
以后再多练练,争取写长一点吧。
^_^
*If we try, we can fly^_^

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Such a cute poem.

还有你的签名阿。让我想起我们班男生唱的

I believe I can fly   I believe I can touch the sky
幸福的地图。

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春天总是这样的唯美,楼主的诗实在是很棒
真相只有一个!^-^
http://tc-tourism.5d6d.com/

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英语的顶真手法呀~~佩服!!赞!

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