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[原创] [云式作文AGAIN]→Update:05/9/18

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Originally posted by 何必有我 at 2005-6-19 12:49 PM:
我的QB都是别人送的~哈哈~娃哈哈哈哈~~~
娃哈哈?又一个品牌代言人啊~
好吧~不当愤怒青年了XD

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倒~娃哈哈~那是我的

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我用QQ本来就只是为了和班上的同学联系,本来就讨厌这种花哨的东西,包括什么Q币。
除了QQ传东西比较快之外,其它没什么优点。
再次呼吁大家用MSN或者ICQ.


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再说一句,
谢谢楼主的原创文章:)
FF好久没有这样的帖子了,
希望大家不要再发没意义的转帖,向楼主学习!支持原创!


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小云子这片文章~~
FF终于有一篇我看的懂得英文了!!!

最后一次上了...

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...嫂子
我以后专门把作文拿给大家看!
好吧~不当愤怒青年了XD

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咳咳,小云难得来一次哦,欢迎!

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...
汗汗
昨天晚上写了一偏作文
太烂了,就不好拿来丢人可~
好吧~不当愤怒青年了XD

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Originally posted by iamtina at 2005-6-19 12:39 PM:
ti've more concerned about your grammar rather than the words, but it seems better than what i could have done,andyway, but just a little question, is your space bar broken down or something, there ...
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今天来FF翻帖子的时候看见的。

TINA说的有道理啊...支持~掌声~鲜花....

= =|||受物语的影响,咱确实8喜欢那个BT东西。汗...这是个很危险的习惯啊。改正改正。恩。

我就这么狂汗下去...饿....我觉得我应该免费给自己一打妖瞳SUPER CAPSULE...= =欠揍的虫子飞走咯~
好吧~不当愤怒青年了XD

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hmm, edited some minor mistakes~~ mainly on the second one, though.


listing the major though:
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Gas is getting less and less. Coal is becoming less and less...
this seems like C-english, it just doesn't sound right. You could say it this way, "The natural resorses around us are getting less and less everyday."

didn't see u update until now~~ Good job! When I'm your age, I couldn't even write one~~~ =)

[ Last edited by luxiaohui2 on 2005-9-27 at 16:34 ]

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