hmm, edited some minor mistakes~~ mainly on the second one, though.
listing the major though:
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Gas is getting less and less. Coal is becoming less and less...
this seems like C-english, it just doesn't sound right. You could say it this way, "The natural resorses around us are getting less and less everyday."
didn't see u update until now~~ Good job! When I'm your age, I couldn't even write one~~~ =)
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