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[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

[这个贴子最后由克莱尔在 2004/09/12 03:03am 第 6 次编辑]

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……
  Yeah, time really go fast, isn';t it?  I remeber once in June wake up in the morning by saying:"Is the end of June already?"  Well, yes, the school is over, that';s a good thing, I guess, but the sad part is say good bye to all my friends in school.  Unlike them, I';m not going to the same highschool as them, I know, is sad, but there';s nothing I can do about it other than saying good bye.  But here I';m not going to say anything about that, incase if I cry out, but here I';m going to talk about my most unforgettble thing that I';ve done during grade 7.  Well, is kind of looking back and see the thing I did, yeah, you can say that again.
  Well, before I start, I really want talk about this thing.  Well, if you know me, then you';ll know I don';t always tell people something that is personal about me.  Um, maybe my friends, I guess.  But well, what can I say, in this story there';s a lots of personal things about myself, and this is why I';ve had this idea for a long time and now I';m writing it.  So first of all, I hope you';ll enjoy it.  And as you know, Canada here is diffrent than China, like the people and a lots of things.  I guess somepeople won';t understand somepart of the story maybe, but if you like it, then that';s all I need.
[size=3]Chaputer 1  The Grade 7 Dance (1)[/size]
  Yeah, somepeople really can';t hold on quiet for a sec, like the girl over there, Elizabeth.  Yeah, I know, I know, it is all her creazy idea.  You might don';t know what I';m taliking about, well, let me tell you then, is her, Elizbeth give the idea on our classmeeting about having a Grade 7 Dance, and I can';t believe that almost everyone in our class accept her idea.  Is everyone creazy?!  Well, it';s not that I don';t like this idea, but Dance?  With guys?  Oh no no no, I';m sure I won';t be asking the guys to go to the dance with me.  I don';t care what you';ll say,  but there';s no way I';m going to the dance.  No way!  And to be honest, I can see somegirls are really happy, I mean really---happy about this.  The minute Elizabeth tell the whole class her idea, some of the girls already start looking at the other guys, whispering.  Gosh, how stpuid.  But well, I can';t act like I don';t care about this dance, ';cause my best friend Jenny already beg me to go with her, so, I have no choice left.  Or do I?  No, I don';t.  But I guess I';ll still have Jenny around if there';s no guy ask me to dance.  I guess...
  At Lunch time, you can see some of the girls already start to ask the guys, well, the guys too.  
  But just when Jenny whispered in my ear:"So who do you want to go to the dance with?"  She asked, and I can feel my face turn red the minute she said it.  
  "Um, I';m not sure, actually, I don';t think any of the guys would ask me to the dance."  
  "Oh, come on, Claire, I already know you had a boyfriend before, so don';t act like some 7 years old coy girl, okay?"  
  "So who do you want to go with?"  I asked her back, I guess I';m little mad about her calling me a "coy girl".  
  "Well,"  now she';s speaking in a very low voice, I can barely hear anything."As you know, all the girls are going for Sam D. now." Sam D,?  Oh my god I hate that guy.  
  "What?!  Are thay blind?!  Why do they want to go with that guy?  Just because he';s popular?"  
  "Well, thatl';s some of the reason I guess."  Jenny said, with a smile on her face.  
  "Get that smile off your face."  I said to her, in case she';s day-dreaming.  
  "Well, you know, you are not so bad either."  She said to me."You know, guys think you are very cute."  
  "Yeah, right.  You don';t have to say this, Jenny.  If all you are trying to do is making me feel better."  I said it to her, smiled.  
  "No, honestly.  And do you know what?  SamW,(We have two "Sam';s in our class.)was looking at you when Elizabeth told her idea.  
  "Really?"  I try to not make my voice sound too excited.  
  "Well, if you could believe it.  But if you want to go with him, you';d better hurry up and make a move, cause I know somegirls are already started making their move."  
  "Give up, Jenny.  You know I';m not that kind of girl."  
  "Well, if I were you, I won';t be so stupid."  She said.  
  "Yeah, like I care about him.  Ha, no way."  But this isn';t the truth.  I like Sam W., Jenny knows it, I have a crush on him, but now I';m acting like I don';t care about him, not even a bit.  But there';s one thing I';m sure of, is that I';m not going to ask a guy to dance.  Yeah, there';s no way I';m doing that.  So now what can I do, waiting for Sam W. to ask me, I don';t think there';s much chance of it, I mean, he';s so popular and unlike the other popular guys, he is much nicer.  Oh, what can I do?
                                                                                                            To Be Continued……
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  Well, this is my frist time writing a long story in HP, I actually think this is very boring, but I hope you like it  :21: .  Wish, I mean~
                                                                                                                             Claire

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

好象有些多语法错误哦，楼主再修改一下吧

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]harryli[/u]在 [i]2004/08/24 11:57am[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
好象有些多语法错误哦，楼主再修改一下吧
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Oh yeah, you';re right.  
But I';m too lazy to fix it today, I';ll do it sometime later……

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

hmm,存一下，慢慢看~~~ 现在用有限了~~~
是真实的吗？ lol

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

I changed your order a little bit, it will help reading~~~
I have found some grammar mistakes, I think I';ll do it later~~~ lol

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/08/25 01:00pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
hmm,存一下，慢慢看~~~ 现在用有限了~~~
是真实的吗？ lol
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是啊，都是真实的呢……
汗~有些地方自己都不敢相信我自己曾经做过那样的事……
汗死~

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[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/08/25 07:36pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
I changed your order a little bit, it will help reading~~~
I have found some grammar mistakes, I think I';ll do it later~~~ lol
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Oh, thanks for doing that...
Cause I';m too lazy to change it, so...
Well, just hope you like the story.

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ah, I';m waiting for more~~~

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

Oh, my god~~
Almost forget, the school is gonna start soon...
By the way, I just saw Sam W. this Monday...

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

so? what happened?

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/09/03 08:40pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
so? what happened?
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You mean what happened when I saw him, on that day?
Well, what else can we do?  Go on a date?  No, just joking.  Um, we said hi, and just like that, and talked about for a while, but not for a long time I guess, cause I was going to a friend';s house. And that';s all, not much going on I know, but I find out one thing for sure, that he';s still very cute...  But bad news, Jenny told me on the phone said she saw him going on a date with another girl, but I don';t think I really care about that right now, I have to get ready for highschool...

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Continue write your story,please^^

[原创]Let';s talk about it……If you would listen to me……(Updated on Page3)

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]克莱尔[/u]在 [i]2004/09/04 07:18am[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
You mean what happened when I saw him, on that day?
Well, what else can we do?  Go on a date?  No, just joking.  Um, we said hi, and just like that, and talked about for a while, but not for a lon ...
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oh, poor you, he doesn';t go to the same high school as you, right?

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[这个贴子最后由克莱尔在 2004/09/05 06:53am 第 1 次编辑]

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/09/05 07:25pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
oh, poor you, he doesn';t go to the same high school as you, right?
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Yeah, that';s right...
But anyways, I don';t think I';m intersted in him anymore, I mean, I get to move on right?
Well, and I had already notice that he was going out with that girl, so it didn';t bother me at all.
By the way, you know that play-boy I was telling you about on the MSN?  Well, I told him that I don';t think we are right for each other.
After I told him that, I was kind of worried if I hurt he';s feelings, but we are just being friends right now, he';s very cool actually, sometime we are just like kind of hanging out, but not like a date you know, is just like a friend-thing.  He';s pretty cute you know, well, as a friend.  And is all diffrent than I thought, it didn';t matter if he';s a play-boy kind of type, cause he';s good friend.  I know, is werid, that I';m telling so much about him, but he';s really nice, not like that knid of person that I thought he was.
  Hope to know more about him sometime, but my friends says if I';m so intersted in him, we should try to go on a date together, but I find out it would very funny if we do, cause right now he';s just a good friend of mine.  

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so he';s not in the school you are going to, right?
i think you should moving on, i mean, you guys won';t even be in the same hight school, so why bother?
one more thing, you are going to be grade 9, right?

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[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/09/05 07:59pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
so he';s not in the school you are going to, right?
i think you should moving on, i mean, you guys won';t even be in the same hight school, so why bother?
one more thing, you are going to  ...
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Wow, I didn';t know that you were here on-line, hehe^0^~~
Well, yeah, you are right, and I guess that';s why I didn';t really care about him going on a date with that girl.
I find out that is kind of werid that I';m keep thinking about that play-boy right now.  Ha, I';m crazy...  I can';t have a crush on him, can I?  No, no, no, no, no!  That is so wrong, what in earth are mine thinking...

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Claire,you are so lucky!!
you can choose who you dance with,but we cannot.
We dance too,and teacher want me dance with a Chinese boy.
THAT IS SO -_-|||
Are you sure you are going to grade 9?i thought not,or maybe i did not understand very well.
go on!

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[quote][b]下面引用由[u]克莱尔[/u]在 [i]2004/09/05 08:07pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]

Wow, I didn';t know that you were here on-line, hehe^0^~~
Well, yeah, you are right, and I guess that';s why I didn';t really care about him going on a date with that girl.
I ...
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well, i was online for only a moment~~
[quote]Claire,you are so lucky!!
you can choose who you dance with,but we cannot.
We dance too,and teacher want me dance with a Chinese boy.
THAT IS SO -_-|||[/quote]
oh, poor tina!~~~
we don';t have to dance! haha, it';s only on our will, they can';t force us to do anything! xixi, i';m lucky~~~

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i thought the Canada';s education is same,why don';t you guys dance?

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oh, we have dance class, buut we don';t have partner dance class~~~
ah, i just don';t want to go to gym and dance, it';s boring~~~