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[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

[这个贴子最后由咪呜在 2004/07/19 01:15pm 第 1 次编辑]

[watermark]The last time I heard my mother’s voice was three years ago, when I was only two-month-old. But I still remember clearly, her tenderly voices which were full of love.
I’ll never forget that day. A warm afternoon, the sky was so blue and the clouds were so white, everything looked wonderful. On that day, my family left me alone in a strange place. I saw them leaving with wondering. Then I spend nearly one month to make myself known that I had been abandoned.
                          *   *   *
Now I live with my friend Tom, a strong black cat who saved me when I was abandoned. Our home is a big garage, which is discarded. We always look for foods in the ashcan. Life is difficult for a stray cat, but luckily, I’m still alive.
                             *   *   *
I can see her from my home. She is a beautiful persian cat. I like to see her sleeping on the windowsill which is not far from mine; I like to see her paced the room in the sunshine; I like to see her noble pose; and I like to see her play with her master, a lovely girl who has beautiful blue eyes. Her eyes look like mine mother’s, I think.
                             *   *   *
Neaps of times, I dream that I am living with my mother, my family; Dream of the first two months in my life; Dream of the days without hunger, cold and loneliness; Dream of I can live with the beautiful persian cat.
Dreams are wonderful, but truth is always ruthless.
                             *   *   *
She is still very beautiful though she is dirty now. She looks at me with fear on her face. I know that, now she is abandoned too. I want to comfort her but she does not want anyone to come close to her.
I don’t know what I can do to help her except going away.
                             *   *   *
Three days! She did not eat anything. She had called her master for three days, with the saddest voice I had ever heard. Day and night, the sad voice didn’t stop for a moment till she died.
                                *   *   *
When Tom told me her death, tear clouded my eyes.
At the end of her life, she was still calling her master who abandoned her. She did not want to live with us, for the blue-eye-girl, she lost her life.
                                *   *   *
This morning, the people who live here discovered her body. They threw it away, and the only thing I could do was looking.
I saw the blue-eye-girl in the crowd. It seemed that she felt neither sad nor compunction. She was smiling all the while!
At that time, I really hate her!
                                *   *   *
Time walks by; my life does not have any changes. I still live with Tom, the strong black cat. In the daytime, we always stay in our home. When the night comes, it is time for us to go out and have our meal. Life is still difficult for a stray cat. But still, I have the fortune.
I raise my head; the beautiful sun will say goodbye to me. I feel that the wind come to me, hot and dry. Tomorrow is another day, but not always is a better day. But now, in my mind, there is a voice told me, though the life is hard, you still must be live for yourself, and never lose heart.
    I know that, the only thing I will do, is try my best to keep up living.

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[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

hmm, what does [b]Neaps of times,[/b] mean?
well, in my opinon, your grammer is pretty good~~~~~~~~

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

neaps of times meas dozens of times or thousands of times.
thanks a lot,now i have to face the national entrance exam of university, the grammer is the most important thing.

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

I know, if you are in university, you must be older than me~~~~

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

i';m senior 2, and next term i will be a senior 3 student, not in university yet...

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

ah, I';m going to be in Senior 2~~~~~
our highest is Senior 4~~~~~~~

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

I think both your grammar and your literary talent are very good.
(oh,forgive me,my grammar is poor.)

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

The diary is so good!

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

写的真不错！给你一个精华作奖励！希望下回还能看见你的原创作品！谢谢喽！

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

Yeah~~~thanks a lot~
luxiaohui2, you are not in China, aren';t you?

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

nope, I lived in Canada

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

well, were you born there?

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]咪呜[/u]在 [i]2004/07/28 04:31pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
well, were you born there?
[/quote]
I wish I was born here, but no. I immigrated here like uh... 4 years ago~~~~

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

No wonder your English is so good.
have you got a hard time when you just immigrated there?
i am always scared of going abroad,and worry about if i can communicate with others.

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

[quote]though the life is hard, you still must be live for yourself, and never lose heart.[/quote]
you know what? this reminded me of Aaron';s "keep believing"

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

years ago, when i wrote this , i had not heard aaron';s songs yet.

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]咪呜[/u]在 [i]2004/08/02 01:05pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
No wonder your English is so good.
have you got a hard time when you just immigrated there?
i am always scared of going abroad,and worry about if i can communicate with others.
[/quote]
well, I kind of got a hard time, but it';s ok, communication isn';t so bad, all the kids are nice here, and they try to explain things to you~~~~~~~

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

it sounds great! thank god.

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

that means, are going to go abroad?

[原创]Diary of a cat 各位指点一下

yes, i am to go to America or Australia.