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[原创]My Poetry Unit

[这个贴子最后由克莱尔在 2004/06/20 04:03am 第 3 次编辑]

[color=#6495ED]When I';m in a bad mode, or full with all the sadness, I will always to make myself feel better,writing a poem, one of the best ways to help me, so, here goes, my Poetry Unit.[/color]
[color=#808080]This is one of the poems I';ve wrote.  It was for one of my bestfriend.[/color]
TO YOU, MY FRIEND
FRIENDSHIP, A BEAUTIFUL THING, A THING THAT I AM ALWAYS WISH FOR.
I WILL NOT FORGET YOU, NEVER, EVER...
                          【FRIENDS  FOREVER】
   FRIENDS ARE FOREVER, WANTS YOU TO REMEMBER, NO MATTER GOOD OR BAD, I AM ALWAY BE THERE FOR YOU , BECAUSE THIS IS WHAT FRIENDS ARE REALLY FOR.
GLAD I MET YOU, GLAD THAT I KNOW YOU, BECAUSE I KNOW THAT FRIENDS ARE NOT EASY TO FIND, BUT I DO WISH IT CAN LAST FOREVER.
GLAD TO BE YOUR FRIEND, GLAD TO BE YOUR PART, BUT I DO REMEMBER, THAT EVERY TIME YOU LEAVE, I  WILL MISS YOU MORE THAN I THINK I COULD.
EVERY TIME I MET YOU, YOU LET ME REMEMBER, HOW MUCH YOU MEANS TO ME, I CANNOT LOSE YOU , I CANNOT FORGET YOU, BECAUSE IN MY HEART, THERE IS ALWAYS A PLACE FOR YOU, LIKE I SAID, NO MATTER WHAT, I WILL BE YOUR FRIEND FOREVER...                                    FOR MY BEST FRIEND:JENNY KIM

[color=#FF69B4]So this is it, we cannot deny, this is our last chance, to say goodbye.  This is also a poem for one of my friend, we';ve been through a lot together, and this is the poem I';ve wrote for her.[/color]
【When I Look Into Your Eyes】
When I look into your eyes, you cannot hind, I can see the sadness inside.
I hate to see your tears fall down, when they touch the ground, my heart break down.
You might don';t know how much you meant to me, cause in my heart, there';s always a places for you, cause you know, I will not dare anyone to hurt you like you';ve been hurt before.
You are the one and the only.

[color=#8FBC8F]I am blind, blind to the dead.  Here';s one of the poem that I wrote when I was upset...[/color]
【I Cannot See The Light Of The Sun】
Dark cloud covers the sun.
Everything is dark, the dark to the dead.
I cannot feel, I cannot deny.
I cannot breath, I cannot free.
I wants to fly, fly to the freedoom.
I wants to remind, remind of the dead.
I will love, if someone brings me a light, so I can find my way, and never get lost again.
Standing here, wating for a light.

[color=#DC143C]I like to take a walk on the street, when I';m sad.  This is the poem.[/color]
【It Cannot Last Forever】
Waliking on the streets, with all the people pass by.
Still can';t help myself with the sadness inside.
It cannot last forever, I know it by my heart.
But I juest fall into the trap once more.
Keeping it in my heart, it cannot last forever.


[color=#8A2BE2]So, these seemed to be the poems I have right now.  Wish you enjoy it.^0^Thank you.[/color]

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????克姐的英语水平是越来越好了！！
我实在是难以下咽此物！

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Um~~~ really nice~~~ Your friends must be touched by you so much!! Hehe~~ Give you a 精华 for your updating~ ^_^ Hehe~~ Thanks~~

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poems对我现在来说还算是比较难，所以嘛，我现在写文~~~~~~~
真的是谢谢Clare啦！我还写不出来呢！~~~~~~~ lol

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To: iamtina, Oh, I';m really glad you like it...^0^  Well, I don';t think my English had improve a lot these days, maybe is because I spend all my time play on the computer?!  -_-;;  Anyways, I';m really happy you like it~~
To:JUNEYEAH, Thank you~~  I';m really happy that I get a 精华 on this, I didn';t even know that I could...  ^0^
To:luxiaohui2,呵呵，发现你也再写chinese的说。。。说实话，有时灵感来了，写什么都是很容易的说那～～不过，我写诗可以，但是就是写不了文章，唉，看到你写的文章的时候，真的是很羡慕的说呢～～

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不错哦~
加油！

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Hope to see more of your works~~ ^_^ keep working!!!

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克姐，我写文章时的“the”老是用不好这是怎么回事？
帮助………………^-^

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hehe~~~~
能看见我写中文是很惊奇吧？真的是很亲切哦！~~~~~
文章嘛，当然比诗好写得多了~~~~~~

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COOL~I LOVE YOUR WORDS A LOT~
IT COMPLETELY SHOWS WHAT I FEEL SOMETIMES~
THERE‘S ALWAYS AN EMPLY PLACE WHICH I WOULE LIKE SOMEBODY TO FILL IN~

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[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/06/27 06:37pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
hehe~~~~
能看见我写中文是很惊奇吧？真的是很亲切哦！~~~~~
文章嘛，当然比诗好写得多了~~~~~~
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呵呵～～是啊，是啊，不知为什么，每次看到你些中文，都觉得很亲切的说呢。嘻嘻～～
^_^，是啊，我觉得你的文章都是很不错的说呢，唉，不知道什么时候可以写的像你一样好呢～～真的是又羡慕又嫉妒啊～～呵呵～～

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[quote]呵呵～～是啊，是啊，不知为什么，每次看到你些中文，都觉得很亲切的说呢。嘻嘻～～
^_^，是啊，我觉得你的文章都是很不错的说呢，唉，不知道什么时候可以写的像你一样好呢～～真的是又羡慕又嫉妒啊～～呵呵～～
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Practice makes perfect, don';t worry about it now, you will getting much better if you keep practicing~~ ^_^ you already did very well, keep on going you will feel much better than before~~ ^_^

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[quote][b]下面引用由[u]JUNEYEAH[/u]在 [i]2004/06/28 06:58pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
Practice makes perfect, don';t worry about it now, you will getting much better if you keep practicing~~ ^_^ you already did very well, keep on going you will feel much better than before~~ ^_^
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Well, I think you are right about that...  But sometimes I don';t know what to write...  And that';s what bothers me... :23:  :33:

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well, i think that might be pretty easy, every time you found out something interesting, you could write about it, and uh, read more books, some books can give you some idea for what to write~~~~~ lol

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That';s ture though...  Well, I will try your ideas, I hope it works...^0^

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don';t worry, I used mine, and it worked really well: do you know the article I wrote called "A White Christmas"? It helped me to get an award from the school and $20!~~~~~ lol
that was so awsome, an ESL student beat anybody else~~~~~~~ ^O^
hehe~~~~~~~~

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I can not beilive this is a real poem!
Keep on !

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your poem is excellent! give you a "E"

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天啊 太深奥了

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[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/07/16 05:26pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
don';t worry, I used mine, and it worked really well: do you know the article I wrote called "A White Christmas"? It helped me to get an award from the school and $20!~~~~~ lol
that  ...
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Oh, really?  That is so cool~~  To tell you the truth, I was in ESL too, but not for too long, only a few weeks, and my teacher said that I could get off there...  Anywanys, I think I was a little oof the topic, but you know, I think that is really cool that you cou beat everybody else and won the price...  Honestly, that';s awsome!!! :13:  :2:  :14: