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[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

[这个贴子最后由luxiaohui2在 2004/06/29 08:51pm 第 3 次编辑]

[watermark]  [equote][color=#31E90FF]这篇文章是我自己写的，这里说的是我自己的成功都有哪些，我也请大家也来讨论一下自己的成功吧！因为现在是考试时间，所以我也没有时间来翻译一下，我准备在暑假时翻译以后再发上来，先请原谅！~~~~~ :13: [/color]
  
  [color=#9932CC]欢迎都来讨论呀！~~~~~~ ^O^ :21: [/color][/equote]
  Everybody is successful, maybe you just didn’t notice. Everybody’s success is in different ways, just like the nature, every different thing represent a kind of success. To achieve success, you are not only try to go for it, you also have to have a destination that can let you enjoy your whole life. In my opinion, my destinations are academic achievements and relationships.
  Academic achievements are always my goal, my destination. Although very often, people said that a student’s life is not only about sports and good marks, but as for me, if your academic achievements are not high enough, you can’t go to a good university or college; if you can’t get a nice degree for yourself, you won’t find a nice job with high salary; if you don’t have enough money that you need, then when you’re sick, who will pay the high medical care fee for you? All these things are like a chain, and the start to this chain is to study well. I don’t particularly have a best subject, because I’m a general person. But I know I’m strong at languages, and that’s why I think my English developed very fast. My success for academic achievement is that I can go to my dreamed university—Toronto.
  To achieve my goal the most important is friendship. “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. This is my favorite phrase about friendships, and I can use this on my four friends. “You can live without your relatives, but you can’t live without any friends.” That’s what my best friend said to me when I left China. Indeed, that’s true. I really miss them, but at the same time, I make some new friends: Maggie, Fariha, Nikki and Lauren. These friends helped me to forget the pain I felt when I left my friends back in China. They brought joy for me, in fact, they are just like water when I’, stuck in the middle of Sahara. I feel very glad that I made friends all over the world, this is the feeling that I can never dream of, this friendship, is my success. This friendship is like a tree, that can never be dead, that can grow, grow, and grow…. Forever…. Endless….To gain true friends for me will be a success because these friends slowly become your family who you can’t live without.
  Family is another important part of me. I know some teenagers may think to get away from the family as quick as possible and start a new life. Well, that’s not my goal. I would like to stay with my whole family as long as I can, that’s what a family for, isn’t it? Although I’m now being separated from my whole family, but they always lived in my heart: their every move; their every saying; and everything about them...will be live in my heart’s deepest corner, in my memory. Because I was one of them, and I will always be one. Family is not only about having the same blood, it’s about love. The things I did with them and those unforgettable memories…. My destination for family is that to remember every member once in our family; to remember every happy moment together; to remember our family spirit, until I run out my last breathe…. This will be my success.
  Sometimes, success is a common word, because it can happen any where, any time, and to any body, every satisfied thing you did is a success. And sometimes, success is not a little word, because you need to stand up and go for it. I’m satisfied with my destination, my success can be as big as my future plan, and my success can be as small as the things I have just done. Success can either be big and small, and those two kind of successes are just what I need to full-fill my entire life.

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    成功是什么。。。。。。
  每个人都是成功的，可能你只是没有注意罢了。每个人的成功都是不同的，就向大自然一样，每个不一样的东西就是一种成功。去得到成功，你不知是要去争取它，还要有一个目标能让你享受你的一生。我的意见是，我的目的地是学习上的成绩和各种社会关系。
  学习上的一些成绩已始终是我的目标，我的目的地。尽管有很多时候，人们都说一个学生的生命不仅仅是学习和体育，但对于我来说，如果你的成绩不是那么的高，你就不能去一个好的大学或学院；如果你不能给自己拿到一个好的学位，你就不会找的一个好的工作配着高的薪水；如果你没有得到你需要的钱，然后你又得了病，谁会帮你支付那些价钱不菲的医疗费？这些东西就像一个无形的链子，而且这个链子的顶端就是要学习好。我不是特别对哪一个科目学得特别好，因为我是一个综合的人。但我知道我的语言能力特别的强，这就是为什么我觉得我的英语进展得特别好。我学习上的成绩的成功是我能考上我梦想中的大学-多伦多。
  能完成我的梦想最重要的是友谊。“患难见真情”。这是我最喜欢的关于友谊谚语，而且我可以把这句话全都用到我的4个朋友身上。“你可以生活没有了亲人，但你不能生活没有了朋友。”这是我的朋友对我说的当我离开了中国。是的，这是非常的正确。我非常地想他们，但在思念的同时，我又交了许多新朋友：Maggie, Fariha, Nikki, 和 Lauren。这些朋友让我忘却了离开我的中国朋友时的痛苦。他们给我带来了欢乐，事实上，当我被困在撒哈拉沙漠的时候，他们就像水源一样。 我非常的高兴我能在全世界交朋友，这就是一种特殊的感觉我怎么也想不出来，这样的友谊，便是我的成功。这样的友谊就像一棵树，一颗永不老死的树，它能长啊，长啊，再长。。。。。。永远。。。。。。无止境。。。。。。
  家庭又是我的另一个重要的部分。我知道一些青少年可能会想离开自己的家庭越快越好然后再去过一个崭新的生活。这不是我想象中的梦想。我会尽量的于我得家人们呆在一起，这就是家庭，不正是这样吗？尽管我现在已于我的家庭分开了，但我永远都不会忘记他们的一举一动。他们的一举一动都回收藏在我的心底，我的记忆中。因为我是他们其中的一个，而且我永远也会是他们中间的一个。家庭不仅仅是关于流着一样的血，是关于爱。我的家庭的目的地是能记住我家中的每一个人，能记住每一个快乐的片刻，能记住他们的灵魂，知道我用完了我最后的一口气。
  有的时候，成功是一个很常见的词语，因为它随时随地都可能发生，每一个满意的事情你做的，就是一种成功。而且有时，成功又不是一个小的词语，因为你要站起来还要去努力寻找它。我很满意我的目的地，我的成功可以与我的未来一样大，我的长工也可以向我刚完成的事情一样的小。成功可以使大或小，而且这样的成功就是我所要得，能让我充满我得以后生命。

好了，现在大家也说说自己的感想吧！~~~~~~ :21:  :74:  :75:
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[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

I';m successful while I';m comfident.
Once,I felt angry ,and success would not come again, I said to everybody slowly :"Leave me alone." Some went away and say:"Just be happy."Some stayed and say:"I';ll make you happy."
What does it mean? It means that I';m successful and I must be confident not only for myself ,but also for my friends!

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

挺好的,有翻译就更好了！呵呵。不好意思，现在没时间，就都交给你啦，huihui!!

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]Cindero[/u]在 [i]2004/06/06 05:29pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
I';m successful while I';m comfident.
Once,I felt angry ,and success would not come again, I said to everybody slowly :"Leave me alone." Some went away and say:"Just be happ ...
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hmm, you really need confidence to do something, and you just can';t lost it~~
June,没关系啦！我已考完时就翻！~~~ lol

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

第四段开头。。。
Family is another important part of me. I know some teenagers may think to get away from the family as quick as possible and start a [color=#800000]mew[/color] life.

I am sorry that you make a mistake
Hehe..Nobody found it ...
It';s new not mew~~
Everyone will have a test..
Our school is 高考考场~~
So we have 6 days rest~~~~~ :20:

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

hmm, thanx! i changed it!~~~~~~
i will officially write my exmas tomorrow~~~~~~
wish me luck!~~~~~~~ lol

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

Well...Good luck````````

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

hehe~~~~ it went well actually, math was easy, and so did science~~~~ lol

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

Congratulation~~!
well.Success.......Perhaps I always failed recently````````
So,success,just like I am the prefect of our poptowm~~~~~~~~
Hehe...

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

hehe~~~~ don';t worry, don';t forget a small thing that you complete can be a success, too!

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

i have seen such a compesition in the text paper

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

Really? You';ve seen it? but this is really my own~~~~

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

I think this really needs the translation... only little people joined this discussion.. I will 固顶 it first, so more people can see it hoho~~

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

ok, i';ll translate them right now, and updates it on weekends~~~~~~~ lol

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

OK~~ Thanks~~ Waiting for it~~ ^_^

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

don';t worry~~~~~~~

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

you did not change launguge,but it';s still okay,
i think success is.....for you thinking,in your mind.
they are simple for somebody,but to me not,do something will all successful is hard for me.
i think if you only think all successful is a thing,that was wrong idea,i will keep the not all successful in my life,why?because one successful just mean you up to a other step,but in your life had millon and billon step!

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

iamtina 。yeah.you are right.
Sucess,we cannot lose it .
For someone never had been sucessful.that';s so 悲哀。

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

sucess is million little things together~~~~

[FF讨论一][原创]Success is... （成功对你来说是什么？）

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