luxiaohui2 2004-5-9 01:15 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
哇噻,我们也要去camping耶~~~~~
克莱尔 2004-5-10 10:24 AM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
呵呵~~很巧的说呢~~嘻嘻~~
克莱尔 2004-5-10 10:30 AM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
[这个贴子最后由克莱尔在 2004/05/10 02:34am 第 1 次编辑]
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原文:My First Novel
By:luxiaohui2
Chapter 2 (上)
The person who stood at the opening door was him! Oh, god! I’m in the same class with him! Ohmigod! I can’t breathe… He walked straight to Mr. Kent and gives him a note, Mr. Kent quickly read the note and stand up, said ”Welcome another member to our class!” Everyone clapped. He continued “His name is Cameron Bruce. Now, let him to introduce himself.” Then Mr. Kent pushed him forward to the class, he hesitate for a few seconds, then said “Well, you all know my name, now. I was living in Toronto before I moved here in August.” “Shirl, that’s when I met him,” I whispered to her excitedly. Then he continued “I hope I can learn a lot more here and make more friends.” He finished up and moved backward little bit, and then everyone clapped again. Mr. Kent step forward and then said “Cam, why don’t you find a seat and sit down.” “OK.” And there he went.
1st Beginning
He took a seat at a far end of the classroom, by himself. I was a little bit disappointed, though. There’s an empty seat right over the other side of me. Oh, get real, he’s new, and he don’t even know you, get over it. I thought. Maybe I’ll find a seat at other classes which is near him or he’ll somehow sit beside me… Wait a minute! What do you thinking right know? I asked myself. Is it study or boys? I definitely prefer the first one. I suppose to go to a good university, right? Besides, I’m still too young, how can I thinking about something else? But…. He’s simply gorgeous, he just simply are. And his gorgeous smile, how can I forget about that? I really can’t, oh, I can’t help myself to thinking about him. Oh, man. I’ll have to wait and talk to Shirl and Mel afterwards.
“Ivy, wait up! Why are you in such a hurry?” Mel yelled.
“Come on, you guys! I got something to tell you. Come, over here.” I told them.
We sat down at the shade of a really tall tree. And we lie down at its trunks, it’s our favorite spot in the campus.
“What happened?” Shirl urged.
I took a deep breath and then asked Shirl “Do you saw the boy who just got here this morning?”
“Oh, yes. I remember him. He’s sort of cute, though.” said Shril.
“He’s the one I told you about. The one I have a crush on.” I said.
“Oh!” Mel and Shirl both said.
“He must be gorgeous, to let have a crush on him. Shirl told me.” Mel teased.
“I’m serious, Mel. It’s not funny!” I warned her.
“Ok, what about him?” Shril asked me.
I took a deepest breath, and then said “Do you think I should go near him?”
Both Mel and Shirl gasped. “Oh, no. You really shouldn’t do that.” Mel said.
“I agree.” Shirl said. “You can’t loose yourself over some boy. We only have one year to go to high school, remember? We need to study hard to go to University of Toronto together. We made a promise to go to there together!”
“Yeah, I remember that. But….” I protested.
“Then don’t forget about it. We really need to study hard.” Mel said.
“Ok, Ok. I’ll forget about it.” I signed and watching at the clouds….
2nd Beginning
He took the seat right beside me on the other side. He sat down and smiled at me, oh, his gorgeous smile! My heart did a double flip and finally I smiled back to him.
“What’s your name?” He asked me gently.
“Well, it’s Ivana Louis, but my friends call me Ivy for short.”
“Hmm, Ivana, good name.” He smiled again.
I did another double flip and trying to find a subject to talk with him. “Why did you move here from Toronto?”
“Well, my dad found a better job here, and he heard the schools here are better the one I’m staying. So, my family moved here.”
“Hmm, fascinating.” I replied.
The bell rang suddenly, it means the first period ended.
“Well, see you later.” I told him.
“Ok, see you” He called back.
翻译:
第二章 (上)
站在敞开门前的人是他!哦,上帝!我跟他在相同的班级里!哦,我的上帝!我已经不能呼吸了……他直着走向Mr.Kent 并递给他一个书信,Mr. Kent 飞快的读完了书信并站了起来,说道:“欢迎另一个学员加入我们的班级!”大家鼓掌道。Mr. Kent 继续说道:“他的名字是Cameron Bruce。现在,让他自我介绍吧。”接着,Mr. Kent把他向班级前方推了一下,他犹豫了几秒钟,然后说道:“现在你们都知道我得名字了。在八月份我搬到这里以前,我住在Toronto。”
“Shirl,我就是在那个时候遇见他的。”我兴奋的小声对她说道。
他继续道:“我希望我可以在这里学到更多的知识,并且结交更多的朋友。”他说完并往后退了退,接着,大家又一次鼓掌。Mr.Kent往前迈了一步并说道:“Cam,为什么不找一个作为坐下来呢。”“好的。”他回答道。
第一个开始
他选择了一个里班级最远的位置,自己一个人。我有一点点失望,因为那里有一个空着的座位就在我得旁边。哦,真实点吧,他是新来的,很可能连你是谁都不知道,忘记吧。我这么想着。也许我可以在别的班级里找到一个离他近一点的座位,或者他会设法坐在我旁边。。。等一下!你现在在想什么?我问自己。是学习重要还是男孩?我应该会选择第一个。我应该去一所好的大学,不是吗?另外,我还是太小了,怎么能想别的事情?但是。。。他就是简单的华丽,就是那么简单。还有他那华丽的微笑,我怎么会忘记呢?我真的不能,哦,我不由自主的想着他。我必须一会去跟Shirl和Mel说。
“Ivy,等一下!你怎么这么急?”Mel喊道。
“你们快点啊!我有一些事情要告诉你们。过来,这边。”我告诉她们。
我们坐在一个高大的树荫下,靠在树干上,这是我们在校园里最喜欢的地方。
“发生了什么事?”Shirl催促道。
我深深的吸了一口气,接着文Shirl:“你看见今天刚来的那个男孩了吗?”
“哦,是的。我记着他,他还是蛮可爱的说呢。”Shirl说着。
“他就是我告诉你的那个人。他就是我喜欢的那个。”
“哦!”Mel和Shirl同时说道。
“他一定是华丽的,让你这么喜欢他。Shirl告诉我的。”Mel戏弄道。
“我是认真的,Mel。一点都不滑稽!”我告诉她。
“好吧,他怎么了?”Shirl问我。
我深深的吸了一口气,然后说道:“你觉得我应改接近他吗?”
Mel和Shirl同时屏住气。“哦,不,你真的不应该那样做。”Mel说道。
“我也同意。”Shirl说道。“你不能在某个男孩身上迷失你自己。我们只有一年就要去高中了,记得吗?我们要努力学习才能去Toronto读书。我们保证过我们要一起去的。”
“是,我记着的。但是。。。”我抗议道。
“那么就不要忘记。我们是需要努力学习的。”Mel说道。
“好吧,好吧,我会试着去忘记关于他的事。”我叹了口气,望着那一朵朵云彩。
第二个开始
他坐在了我旁边的那个位置,对我微笑着。平,他那华丽的微笑。我的心翻腾着,终于回给了他一个微笑。
“你叫什么名字?”他优雅的问道。
“恩,Ivana Louis,但是我的朋友们喜欢叫我Ivy。”
“恩,Ivana,很不错的名字。”他再次微笑着说道。
我的心再次翻腾起来,试着去找一个话题与他交谈。“为什么你从Toronto搬到着来呢?”
“我父亲在这里找到了一份更好的工作,他也听说这的学校比我以前的那个好的多。所以,我得家庭搬到了这里。”
“恩,的确是很迷惑。”我安慰道。
铃声响了,意味着这节课已经结束了。
“那么,一会见。”我对他说道。
“好的,再见。”他回答道。
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说实在的,翻译的这么慢,还要归功于我那破费的电脑。。。唉~~^0^
克莱尔 2004-5-10 10:33 AM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
[size=3]【FF翻译同人】[/size]
原文:My First Novel
By:luxiaohui2
Chapter 2 (下)
“You seemed to be hyper today, Ivy.” Mel asked furiously.
“Well, it’s nothing.” I protested.
“Oh, I know.” Shirl said. “Who’s the guy you’re talking to first period? Is he the boy you met at the mall?”
“You know that already.” I murmured.
“Ha, I knew it!” Shirl screamed excitedly.
“He must be really gorgeous.” Mel added.
“How did you know?” I asked.
“You hardly have a crush on anyone who looks so-so.” Mel teased.
“Oh, shut up. Mel.” But I beamed.
“But seriously, Ivy. Are you sure about the guy? You barely know him.” Shirl asked.
“I’m sure about Cam, he’s gorgeous. Don’t you see?”
“Yes, I saw. But are you sure?” Shirl asked again.
“Oh, don’t get too old, Shirl.” Mel said “If Ivy’s sure about Cam, then we have nothing to worry about her.”
“OK” Shirl still sounded unconvinced.
“Don’t worry, Shirl. I will let you see the real Cam.” I said confidently.
“Ok, then.” Shirl finally smiled.
翻译:
第二章 (下)
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“Ivy,你今天看起来非常的愉快。”Mel激烈的问道。
“哦,没什么。”我抗议道。
“哦,我知道。”Shirl说道。“跟你在第一节课谈话的男生是谁?是那个你在商场遇见的男孩吗?”
“你已经知道了。”我低声说道。
“哈,我早就知道!”Shirl兴奋的尖叫道。
“他一定是非常的华丽。”Mel加上。
“你怎么知道?”我问道。
“你难得喜欢上一个长得一般的男生。”Mel戏弄道。
“哦,闭嘴吧,Mel。”虽然这样说着,但是我却微微笑了。
“但是说真的,Ivy。你确定那个男生吗?你还不是很了解他。”Shirl问道。
“我确定Cam,他是华丽的,你没发现吗?”
“是的,我知道。但是你确定吗?”Shirl再次问道。
“哦,不要罗嗦了,Shirl。”Mel说道。“假如Ivy确定Cam,那么我们就不用为她担心了。”
“好吧。”Shirl不确定的说道。
“不要担心,Shirl。我会让你看到Cam的真实的一面的。”我确定的说。
“那么,好吧。”Shirl终于露出了微笑。
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说实在的,翻译的这么慢,还要归功于我那破费的电脑。。。唉~~^0^
luxiaohui2 2004-5-10 12:37 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
真不错啊!~~~~~~
我们是下一个星期二去camping的~~~~~爽,我不用上学啦!~~~~~~~
JUNEYEAH 2004-5-11 01:56 AM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
Lucky you~~~ I';m quite busy, and I won';t be able to come here very often from next week on...
luxiaohui2 2004-5-11 09:06 AM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
oh, I really hope you can do well on your exams, good luck!~~~~~~~~
克莱尔 2004-5-12 08:39 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
Okay, looks like you gays is gonna have all the fun while I';m wroking on Chapter 3, but actually, I haven';t started yet...^0^
luxiaohui2 2004-5-13 09:22 AM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
hehe~~~~~~ not really.
i just cameback from camping, Claire, you should know that there';s snow falling in the 3 middle provinces, that';s when i got to stuck in that snow!!!!!!!!! it';s freezing~~~~~~~~~~
克莱尔 2004-5-13 05:04 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
Oh... really? Is snowing over there? I didn';t know... But you had fun anyways, right?
luxiaohui2 2004-5-14 03:05 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
nope, not really, it';s a disaster~~~~~~~~~~
幽灵公主 2004-5-16 06:16 AM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/05/10 05:37pm[/i] 发表的内容:[/b]
真不错啊!~~~~~~
我们是下一个星期二去camping的~~~~~爽,我不用上学啦!~~~~~~~
[/quote]
好幸福呀!
为什么我就只是一个可怜的初三生呢!
:1:
luxiaohui2 2004-5-16 01:10 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]幽灵公主[/u]在 [i]2004/05/15 10:16pm[/i] 发表的内容:[/b]
好幸福呀!
为什么我就只是一个可怜的初三生呢!
[/quote]
我也是啊!~~~~
只是我在国外罢了~~~~
克莱尔 2004-5-16 02:25 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/05/14 08:05pm[/i] 发表的内容:[/b]
nope, not really, it';s a disaster~~~~~~~~~~
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Oh... Well... What can I say... Hope you have fun anyways...^0^ After you finish it, tell me about it, I really wants to hear it...
luxiaohui2 2004-5-17 01:42 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
no, you don';t want know about it~~~~~
克莱尔 2004-5-22 01:03 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/05/17 06:42pm[/i] 发表的内容:[/b]
no, you don';t want know about it~~~~~
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Why? Did some bad think had happened? I mean, not only the rain...
luxiaohui2 2004-5-22 01:22 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
well...
something nasty, some of the students stole liqours form the store and drink it, they didn';t even reach the legall drinking age!~~~~~~~~
克莱尔 2004-5-23 11:56 AM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
[这个贴子最后由克莱尔在 2004/05/23 03:57am 第 1 次编辑]
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/05/22 06:22pm[/i] 发表的内容:[/b]
well...
something nasty, some of the students stole liqours form the store and drink it, they didn';t even reach the legall drinking age!~~~~~~~~
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Oh... I can tell that';s not a nice ting to do... So this is what went wrong? I thought you would have a nice camp to relax yourself, but I didn';t know that this would happen... It is awful...
luxiaohui2 2004-5-23 02:39 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
i know~~~~~~~~~~ it really shouldn';t happen~~~~~~~
克莱尔 2004-5-24 06:33 PM
【FF翻译同人】My First Novel
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]luxiaohui2[/u]在 [i]2004/05/23 07:39pm[/i] 发表的内容:[/b]
i know~~~~~~~~~~ it really shouldn';t happen~~~~~~~
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Well, what can I say, hope you have a nice camp next time...