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Chapter 4
1st Story
  Now, it’s the fourth week of the school. And yet, I feel pretty fine, the feeling toward Cam is still there, but it’s not as much as before. As we get into more studying, the studies became my main thing to do and it full filled half of my days, I feel sometimes I can loose myself in the study, you know, it’s pretty fun sometimes. Well, get real, is it really more fun than going out and have a party? I really don’t think so. I still didn’t get to know Cam; we just talk sometimes in history, because he sits besides me. The topics is only and always about all the subjects, especially for history. Everybody knows that my history is the best in the class, oh well, that’s a pretty nice reason for “talking”. But I found out that he doesn’t have a girlfriend, oh, I remember, he just got here. Oh, well….
  Shirl and Mel and me are still best friends, I can’t mad at them just because they said that it’s not the right time, we know each other since kindergarten, we can’t ruined our friendship just because of that! And I still keep in touch with Carol; she’s my best friend over the net.

  Today morning, just like other days, as I’m going to go to my history class at class change time, I found that the girl in my adviser group and her friend stand outside of our classroom and peep inside the class. I’m curios of course, but I just said hi to them and got into the room. But the girl called me back:
  “Ivy, come over here for sec!”
  “Oh, what’s up, Lotus?” I turned around.
  “What’s the guy’s name in that gray shirt?” The other girl questioned eagerly.
  I traced her index finger which was pointing in the middle of the classroom, and then I said “Cam?”
  “What’s his last name?” Lotus asked.
  “Bruce?” I’m still curios, “Why you ask about him?”
  “Ok, thanks, Ivy!” The other girl said.
  “But why… wh….” I still didn’t finish my sentence, but then they ran away to their next class.
  “Hmm, interesting…. Why they asked me about him?” I questioned myself
  The bell suddenly rang, and I realized that I’m going to be late if I’m not quicker, Mr. Duncan doesn’t like to wait. I step into the classroom and settled myself into my seat, but my mind is still on the conversation I just had. I can’t wait to tell Shirl and Mel about it….
  “Ivy, you said you have something to tell us, what is it?” Mel asked during our lunch break.
  “Ok, I got a really important thing to tell you. Do you know the girl that named Lotus that I told you about?
  “Oh, yeah…. the girl that came from the same country as you did?” Shirl asked.
  “Today just before history, she and her friend asked me about Cam!” I said rapidly.
  Shirl and Mel glanced each other, and then Shirl said “So?”
  “’So’ what?” I exclaimed.
  “What wrong with that?” Mel said.
  “Doesn’t it mean anything?” I protested.
  “If it does mean something, what’s up with you? You’re not his mother or something.” Shirl said
  “But…. But….”
  “No ‘but’s Ivy! It’s none of your business!” Mel bused out.
  “Yeah, right…. You’re right….” I sighed.

2nd Story
  The time past pretty quickly, just like yesterday I talked to Carol over the internet, and then today it was four weeks later. They always said that when you are enjoying yourself, the time passes like the light, that’s true, I admit. Well, the most fun was about the studies-I got the highest mark in history in our grade! I was so happy, you know, being “number one”. And Cam and I are getting pretty well right now; we talked a lot in the class, well, quietly. Shirl still a bit concern about what I’m doing right now, but we still get well, we started our friendship since kindergarten, it’s the strongest bond! Ha, I just like saying that we are the best friends.
  Today morning, just like other days, as I’m going to go to my history class at class change time, I found that the girl in my adviser group and her friend stand outside of our classroom and peep inside the class. I’m curios of course, but I just said hi to them and got into the room. But the girl called me back:
  “Ivy, come over here for a sec!”
  “Oh, what’s up, Lotus?” I turned around and walked toward her.
  “What’s the guy’s name in that gray shirt?” The other girl questioned eagerly.
  I traced her index finger with my eyes the finger was pointing in the middle of the classroom, which there’s a guy sitting, and then I said “Cam?”
  “What’s his last name?” Lotus asked.
  “Bruce?” I said curiously, “Why you ask about him?”
  “Ok, thanks, Ivy!” The other girl said.
  “But why… wh….” I still didn’t finish my sentence, but then they ran away to their next class.
  “Hmm, interesting…. Why they asked me about him?” I questioned myself as I getting into the class.
  As I finished my homework, then I got on to the computer, internet is my favorite thing to do at my spare time, I don’t want internet take over my life, I still got a life to live, you know. But I still like to chat with people in the chat room. When I just got in to the room a girl (I think) called “Virgo” found me and said that she want to chat with me, of course, I accepted. Because we are don’t really know about each other, so tell her something won’t hurt a lot, so I told her about the conversation I had in the morning’s class change. She typed:
  “Is that true?”
  “Of course that’s true. What do u think that means?” I typed back.
  “Hmm, pretty interest’…. Maybe that girl thinks that boy’s cute now.” The screen shows.
  “Ur right, it’s indeed very interesting.” I typed, and then I fell into thinking….

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Chapter 5
1st Story
Right after the day that Lotus asked me about Cam, although Shirl and Mel tell me it’s none of my business, but I’m still curious about it. In the morning’s adviser group, I asked Lotus about the event:
  “Lotus, I’m just curious, why you guys asked me about Cam?” I asked.
  Lotus looked around; make sure there are nobody listens to us (in fact, everybody’s busing talking), then she said in a voice that almost like a whisper:” Ivy, can you promise not to tell any body else?”
  “Um…” I stopped for a few seconds, hesitating. Then I said:” Ok, I promise.”
  “Cross your heart?” She’s still not sure about telling me the truth.
  “Yeah, cross my heart.” I replied.
  “Do you know my friend, Yesim?” She said.
  I shook my head blankly.
  “Ok, she’s my best friend in my class. And that day, she saw Cam in the hall way, and he’s kind of cute, you know.”
  I nodded.
  Lotus continued: “So she decided to follow him. So we followed him at class changes, to see all the things he’s doing.”
  I opened my mouth slightly, but still listening to her.
  “But since you are in the same class with him, I think Yesim will let you pass notes to him. We will meet you at your locker during class change.”
  I nodded again, but I still can’t talk.
  Just at the second long class change, as always, I’m standing at my locker, change my books to ready to go the next set of class. Lotus and her friend Yesim came up to my locker, and now I can see Yesim properly: curly, brown hair, down her shoulder; hazel eyes-just normal features; normal height for her age, unlike me, I’m pretty tall at my age; a bit “strong” (which I mean she’s a bit fat), which, also unlike me, I’m bit thin-too thin; but I found out one thing, which, we are in common, we both have glasses. She seems open, and then we just said hi to each other, the talking is left for Lotus to do it. “Ivy, here’s a note we just wrote, we want you to just give it to him. Can you do that?” I nodded. Well, I don’t really want to do it, but just then I thought, just help a friend, right? A friend in need is a friend indeed. Well, that’s it, I ‘m going to do it…
  The time past really quickly for the day, I didn’t have any class with him until the last period (well, that’s not the reason, I actually don’t want to give it to him), if Lotus and her friend didn’t hurrying me so much, I will just make a lie about it, well, Lotus is my friend, I shouldn’t do that. If it isn’t my conscience (honestly, I’m not joking), I wouldn’t do it. Finally, I decided to give the note to Cam during the last period-history, that when he sat beside me, then we can talk freely. Well, I still can’t get over him, so when I talk to him, I might of flush a bit. I gave him the note, just said:
“A girl wants me to give this to you.”
Then I looked away. Trying not to imagine what’s going on next. He then send out a very strange sound, I turned to him, to see what he is going to say. He shook his head a bit, and then he passed the note around to his mates. I almost going to tell him not to passing around, it’s for him, but one of his mates stopped me:
“Hey, Cam! Who’s “Kamp?”
Cam answered: “I don’t know. Ivy gave this to me.”
His mates all stared at me, I shrugged, and then I asked:
“Can you show the note to me?” One of his mates passed it to me, I just read the top of the note, and then I know what’s wrong: Yesim wrote “Kamp” for his name instead of “Cam”. Well, I should tell them this. Cam ask for the note back, I gave it to him, he just crouched it, and then he threw it away in the trash, like throwing a basketball, it went straight in. His mates were all cheering for him, very loudly. Indeed, we are still in history class. Mr. Kiddel stared at their direction, and then said: “This class is not gym, guys. Try to calm down.” Shirl gave me a what-are-you-doing-messing-with-these-guys-and-why-didn’t-you-listen-to-your-history-teacher look, I shrugged, and then I buried my face into the text book. Oh, I can’t listen to what Mr. Kiddel saying right now, I’ve got to tell my friends about it, and of course, I have to tell Lotus and Yesim about how Cam reacted.
2nd Story

It was pretty interesting to talk to that girl last night, we almost share the same interest (I said “almost”-it means that she likes rap music, but I like pop music better), maybe we can be friends over the net, just like me and Carol.
On the way to the school in the morning, I told Shirl about the new girl I know from the net (Shirl already knew about Lotus-Yesim incident. Why? Because we are best friends! And that includes Mel. Just after I got off from the internet, I phoned them right away), because I told her too much about Lotus-Yesim incident, it almost took an hour to tell both of them about it, I didn’t have the time to tell them about the “Virgo” girl (ha, “Virgo”, “girl” it sort of rhymed! I’m a genius!). Well, it’s really nothing to talk about her, I just told Shirl that we are in the same age, share some interests and what did we talked about. It’s really nothing. But Shirl took it too seriously:
“Where’s she come from?” She asked suspiciously.
“Oh, I haven’t got any chance to ask her yet.” I answered automatically.
“What if “she” is not a girl?” Shirl asked again, suspiciously.
“What do you mean she’s not girl? Do you even forget about how to speak English?” I almost laughed about Shirl’s question.
Shirl tried again: “I mean what if she’s a boy? Everybody is trying to be the opposite sex over the net now.”
I laughed, so hard, almost can’t breathe. Actually, I’m almost chocking. Shirl stared at me, again, suspiciously.
When I calm down, I answered: “How come a boy named himself ‘Virgo’? It’s a girl’s name! ‘Virgo’ and ‘girl’ actually rhymed! Do you know that?”
“Of course I know that, Ivy. It’s just that… Maybe it’s dangerous…” Shirl replied quietly.
I get it now “Shirl, don’t worry. I’m not that foolish to meet someone that I don’t know of. It’s nothing to worry about.” I assured her. Shirl is always is that way, cared for everybody, like their mom. Actually, I nearly spoke out my thoughts.
Shirl smiled.
At locker break, I told Mel exactly what I told to Shirl, and of course, how Shirl reacted. Mel laughed so hard (we’re lucky that Shirl’s in the washroom and can’t see us), everybody around us is staring at us, like some childish kids.
“Shirl’s always like that way.” Mel said between her laughs.
“Well, I know. That’s why I told you this.” I answered while I was smiling.
“Actually,” Mel stopped laughing “We really need that.”
“Well, I suppose.”
When I just finished my sentence, Lotus and her friend came up to my locker and Mel saw they came up, and winked at me and disappeared. Ah, that’s what a real friend does. Anyway, Lotus done the talking part:
“Ivy, here’s Yesim.”
We both said hi to each other and then both stared at Lotus.
Lotus looked around; make sure there are nobody listens to us (in fact, everybody’s busing talking), then she said in a voice that almost like a whisper:” Ivy, can you promise not to tell any body else?”
  “Um…” I stopped for a few seconds, hesitating. Then I said:” Ok, I promise.”
  “Cross your heart?” She’s still not sure about telling me the truth.
  “Yeah, cross my heart.” I replied.
  “Do you know my friend, Yesim?” She said.
  “Yes?”
  “Well, she’s my best friend in my class. And that day, she saw Cam in the hall way, and he’s kind of cute, you know.”
  I nodded, at the same time; I found out that Yesim is staring at me.
  Lotus continued: “So she decided to follow him. We followed him at class changes, to see all the things he’s doing. And then, we just saw you walked in the same classroom as him, so I thought you can help us.”
  I opened my mouth slightly, but still listening to her.
  “Since you are in the same class with him, we now want you please to pass this note to him and see how he reacts about it. Can you help us?”
  I nodded again, but I still can’t talk, it made me stunned. And I saw Yesim smiled happily. Right, I think she really likes him, just like “love at the first sight”, well, I didn’t believe about it, but now, after I saw Cam in that mall…. I think I should believe it.
  The time past really quickly for the day, I didn’t have any class with him until the last period (well, that’s not the reason, I actually don’t want to give it to him, you know, I like Cam too). So finally I decided to give the note to Cam during the last period-history, that when he sat beside me, then we can talk freely. Well, you know it’s an awkward thing to pass a note to a boy, since it’s not your self’s, so I decided to get over it quickly: I gave him the note, just said:
“A girl wants me to give this to you.”
Then I looked away. Trying not to imagine what’s going on next. He then send out a very strange sound, I turned to him, to see what he is going to say. He shook his head a bit, and then he passed the note around to his mates. I almost going to tell him not to passing around, it’s for him, but one of his mates stopped me:
“Hey, Cam! Who’s ‘Kamp’? And who give this to you?”
Cam answered: “I don’t know. Ivy gave this to me.”
His mates all stared at me, I shrugged, and then I asked:
“Can I see that note?” One of his mates passed it to me, I just read the top of the note, and then I know what’s wrong: Yesim wrote “Kamp” for his name instead of “Cam”. Well, I should tell them this. Cam ask for the note back, I gave it to him, he just crouched it, and then he threw it away in the trash, like throwing a basketball, it went straight in. His mates were all cheering for him, very loudly. Indeed, we are still in history class. Mr. Kiddel stared at their direction, and then said: “This class is not gym, guys. Try to come down.” Shirl gave me a what-are-you-doing-messing-with-these-guys-and-why-didn’t-you-listen-to-your-history-teacher look, I shrugged, and then I buried my face into the text book. Oh, I can’t listen to what Mr. Kiddel saying right now, I’ve got to tell my friends about it, and of course, I have to tell Lotus and Yesim about how Cam reacted. It’s awful, although I’m not the one who wrote this note, and I’m not considering being that person.

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Chapter 6
1st Story
Right before end of the school day, Lotus and Yesim found me at my locker, and wish to hear what did Cam reacted. Well, they should be surprised, I thought, they didn’t even expected that, that’s for sure. They seemed all excited, as I can see. I went straight to them, and then Lotus spoke first:
“So, what did Cam say?” She asked excitedly.
“Well, I think you guys wrote his name wrong, it spells ‘Cam’, not ‘Kamp’. He should the note to me and his mates, and they were all asking him who’s ‘Kamp’” I said automatically, and I thought it was a little bit of laugh myself, but I just didn’t really laugh out loud.
“What!” Yesim all but nearly yelled, luckily, the hall around us is so noisy, so we didn’t catch much attention.
“He showed the notes to his friends?! Are you kidding me?!” Yesim yelled again, sarcastically.
“Well… I think he didn’t think the note is for him, that’s the point. And actually, by my information, I’m not kidding you, it’s really true.” I’m bit angry by now, is she calling me a liar?
“Ok, we didn’t really expected this to be happen,” Lotus said. “Maybe we should write him another note, can you help us again, Ivy?”
“Sure I can help you, but this time, write his name right.”
“Oh, thank you very much, I owe you one.” Lotus said gratefully.
“You are really welcome. But you really owe me a sundae.” I joked to her.
“Ok, I will remember that. Well, we will see you Ivy.” Lotus said.
“See you guys.”  Watching them cruising around the hall I really hope I won’t see them again tomorrow.
  Just after they were gone, Shirl and Mel came right at me; I can see that Shirl’s bit angry, probably because I didn’t listen at history, well, the class’s over now, what can I do? I thought.
  Mel spoke first:” What happened at history? Shirl told me that you and some guys were laughing and you didn’t hear one thing Mr. Kiddel said. Is that true?” She finished that sentence just in one breathe, you can see how excited she was.
  “Well, it’s kind of true. But wait me tell you the story first.”
  “Is your story true? They wrote ‘Cam’ into ‘Kamp’? How can they think his name spelled that way?” Mel asked the question second time.
  “Honestly, guys, do you really think my pronunciation is that bad?” I asked them on a bench that’s in the park just outside the school.
  “Absolutely not. Well, at least I don’t think so. Shirl, what do you think?” Mel said.
  I can see that Shirl’s still not speaking to me, of course it’s because the history class incident. Well, who cares, she will get over it quickly.
  “It’s ok, I’m going home now, see you guys tomorrow.” I got up, and waved at Mel for good-bye. Shirl’s still mad at me and I know she will get better tomorrow. When that thought crossed my mind, I smiled at myself, it’s only because I’ve known her too well.
  Well, I really hope Shirl will forgive me and I hope Yesim won’t be show up without another note again. I really need my best friend, and I don’t want anything other than a friend.
2nd Story

  Right before end of the school day, Lotus and Yesim found me at my locker, and wish to hear what did Cam reacted. Well, they should be surprised, I thought, they didn’t even expected that, that’s for sure. They seemed all excited, as I can see. I went straight to them, and then Lotus spoke first:
“So, what did Cam say?” She asked excitedly.
“Well, I think you guys wrote his name wrong, it spells ‘Cam’, not ‘Kamp’. He should the note to me and his mates, and they were all asking him who’s ‘Kamp’” I said automatically, and I thought it was a little bit of laugh myself, but I just didn’t really laugh out loud.
“What!” Yesim all but nearly yelled, luckily, the hall around us is so noisy, so we didn’t catch much attention.
“He showed the notes to his friends?! Are you kidding me?!” Yesim yelled again, sarcastically.
“Well… I think he didn’t think the note is for him, that’s the point. And actually, by my information, I’m not kidding you, it’s really true.” I’m bit angry by now, is she calling me a liar?
“Ok, we didn’t really expected this to be happen,” Lotus said. “Maybe we should write him another note, can you help us again, Ivy?”
“Sure I can help you, but this time, write his name right.”
“Oh, thank you very much, I owe you one.” Lotus said gratefully.
“You are really welcome. But you really owe me a sundae.” I joked to her.
“Ok, I will remember that. Well, we will see you Ivy.” Lotus said.
“See you guys.”  Watching them cruising around the hall I really hope I won’t see them again tomorrow.
  I didn’t have time to tell my mates, because they all have drama rehearsal. They all choose drama, but not me, because I thought drama is very lame. I don’t know why, I just think drama is not the one for me. I went straight home, and got my usual snacks before doing my homework. But today, I changed my mind, I decided to go on the internet first, and then do my homework. As I got on the internet, I found out that Virgo’s on the net, too. That’s funny: I went home early today, because I don’t have class in the last period, if she’s in school, but how come she’s home early? Or is she like me, doesn’t have class in the last period? Curiously, I asked her what’s really happening. She actually “laughed” on the net, and said that she lives in Toronto, not in western Canada. I really hoped I didn’t ask her that, because it makes me sound stupid. Well, it has already done, isn’t it? I saw that Shirl and Mel haven’t back right now, so, instead, I told Virgo the history incident, she laughed at that, too. She said that how can a person write to a person and write the address person’s name wrong? Isn’t that lame? I laughed at her last word. Really, she could be pretty funny too. I started to like her after a few talks, I’m thinking she could be my best net friend too, like Carol.

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you know in Chapter 4, there are two paragraphs are the same in the 1st story and the 2nd story:
Today morning, just like other days, as I’m going to go to my history class at class change time, I found that the girl in my adviser group and her friend stand outside of our classroom and peep inside the class. I’m curios of course, but I just said hi to them and got into the room. But the girl called me back:
“Ivy, come over here for sec!”
“Oh, what’s up, Lotus?” I turned around.
“What’s the guy’s name in that gray shirt?” The other girl questioned eagerly.
I traced her index finger which was pointing in the middle of the classroom, and then I said “Cam?”
“What’s his last name?” Lotus asked.
“Bruce?” I’m still curios, “Why you ask about him?”
“Ok, thanks, Ivy!” The other girl said.
“But why… wh….” I still didn’t finish my sentence, but then they ran away to their next class.
“Hmm, interesting…. Why they asked me about him?” I questioned myself

Is that a mistake??

And in Chapter 5 there two paragraphs are the same again...
Lotus looked around; make sure there are nobody listens to us (in fact, everybody’s busing talking), then she said in a voice that almost like a whisper:” Ivy, can you promise not to tell any body else?”
“Um…” I stopped for a few seconds, hesitating. Then I said:” Ok, I promise.”
“Cross your heart?” She’s still not sure about telling me the truth.
“Yeah, cross my heart.” I replied.
“Do you know my friend, Yesim?” She said.
“Yes?”
“Well, she’s my best friend in my class. And that day, she saw Cam in the hall way, and he’s kind of cute, you know.”
I nodded, at the same time; I found out that Yesim is staring at me.
Lotus continued: “So she decided to follow him. We followed him at class changes, to see all the things he’s doing. And then, we just saw you walked in the same classroom as him, so I thought you can help us.”
I opened my mouth slightly, but still listening to her.
“Since you are in the same class with him, we now want you please to pass this note to him and see how he reacts about it. Can you help us?”
I nodded again, but I still can’t talk, it made me stunned. And I saw Yesim smiled happily. Right, I think she really likes him, just like “love at the first sight”, well, I didn’t believe about it, but now, after I saw Cam in that mall…. I think I should believe it.
The time past really quickly for the day, I didn’t have any class with him until the last period (well, that’s not the reason, I actually don’t want to give it to him, you know, I like Cam too). So finally I decided to give the note to Cam during the last period-history, that when he sat beside me, then we can talk freely. Well, you know it’s an awkward thing to pass a note to a boy, since it’s not your self’s, so I decided to get over it quickly: I gave him the note, just said:
“A girl wants me to give this to you.”
Then I looked away. Trying not to imagine what’s going on next. He then send out a very strange sound, I turned to him, to see what he is going to say. He shook his head a bit, and then he passed the note around to his mates. I almost going to tell him not to passing around, it’s for him, but one of his mates stopped me:
“Hey, Cam! Who’s ‘Kamp’? And who give this to you?”
Cam answered: “I don’t know. Ivy gave this to me.”
His mates all stared at me, I shrugged, and then I asked:
“Can I see that note?” One of his mates passed it to me, I just read the top of the note, and then I know what’s wrong: Yesim wrote “Kamp” for his name instead of “Cam”. Well, I should tell them this. Cam ask for the note back, I gave it to him, he just crouched it, and then he threw it away in the trash, like throwing a basketball, it went straight in. His mates were all cheering for him, very loudly. Indeed, we are still in history class. Mr. Kiddel stared at their direction, and then said: “This class is not gym, guys. Try to come down.” Shirl gave me a what-are-you-doing-messing-with-these-guys-and-why-didn’t-you-listen-to-your-history-teacher look, I shrugged, and then I buried my face into the text book. Oh, I can’t listen to what Mr. Kiddel saying right now, I’ve got to tell my friends about it, and of course, I have to tell Lotus and Yesim about how Cam reacted. It’s awful, although I’m not the one who wrote this note, and I’m not considering being that person.

And there';s another two paragraphs which are the same...
Right before end of the school day, Lotus and Yesim found me at my locker, and wish to hear what did Cam reacted. Well, they should be surprised, I thought, they didn’t even expected that, that’s for sure. They seemed all excited, as I can see. I went straight to them, and then Lotus spoke first:
“So, what did Cam say?” She asked excitedly.
“Well, I think you guys wrote his name wrong, it spells ‘Cam’, not ‘Kamp’. He should the note to me and his mates, and they were all asking him who’s ‘Kamp’” I said automatically, and I thought it was a little bit of laugh myself, but I just didn’t really laugh out loud.
“What!” Yesim all but nearly yelled, luckily, the hall around us is so noisy, so we didn’t catch much attention.
“He showed the notes to his friends?! Are you kidding me?!” Yesim yelled again, sarcastically.
“Well… I think he didn’t think the note is for him, that’s the point. And actually, by my information, I’m not kidding you, it’s really true.” I’m bit angry by now, is she calling me a liar?
“Ok, we didn’t really expected this to be happen,” Lotus said. “Maybe we should write him another note, can you help us again, Ivy?”
“Sure I can help you, but this time, write his name right.”
“Oh, thank you very much, I owe you one.” Lotus said gratefully.
“You are really welcome. But you really owe me a sundae.” I joked to her.
“Ok, I will remember that. Well, we will see you Ivy.” Lotus said.
“See you guys.”  Watching them cruising around the hall I really hope I won’t see them again tomorrow.

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oh, that one, I was just too lazy to write a different one~~~~~~~~
no worries~~~~~ lol

[原创] My First Novel-更新！

Oh~~~ I thought they are mistakes~~ ^_^ If you write them differently, it';ll be much better, because when my first time saw it, I thought I read the wrong paragraph~~ ^_^

[原创] My First Novel-更新！

hmm, i will change them~~~~~~~

[原创] My First Novel-更新！

[这个贴子最后由luxiaohui2在 2004/08/18 10:18pm 第 1 次编辑]

Chapter 7
1st Story
Honestly, I don’t see why should Shirl angry at me, I really didn’t do anything wrong, did I? I just helped a friend, that what I should do right? That what friends do, or at least I think so. Really, because she’s still mad at me, she didn’t even walk with me to school this morning! How could that possible? Mel is totally cool about it, and why can’t she be that, too? I mean, this incident didn’t cost most of my time at all, and it’s not ruining my future or something, why Shirl must be so bossy all the time, I already have a mom, and I don’t need another one! Well, if she doesn’t want to talk to me, it’s okay for me, and I’m totally cool about it. I just can’t stand her bossy attitude anymore. I told Mel about it during the morning break; she’s kind of shocked to hear me say that, because I can always put up with her. Well, it’s not my fault this time, it’s totally hers.
  “Honestly, Ivy. Why do you think you should do that?” Mel asked.
  “It’s not my fault. It’s her not talking to me in the first place. And you know what, she didn’t even walk with me this morning! If she got over that, she won’t even walk to school without me! We are like, best friends since kindergarten!” I nearly yelled down the hall. Lucky for me, it’s packed with noise, no one noticed me.
  “Calm down! I know, you guys are the best friends in this year, it’s just I don’t know why you do that to Shirl.” Mel tried to yell over me.
  “I don’t care! And don’t you dare even thinking about getting us together again!” I yelled angrily. And at the same time, I walked away from Mel, to get into my next class.

  I thought today is badly enough, and I’m obviously wrong about it. Just after lunch (I set beside Mel, and Shirl sat at her other side, we are still not talking to each other), Lotus and Yesim “found” me at my locker, and then my fears happened:
  “Ivy, here’s another note for Cam.” Yesim said happily. And she hand me another pink note to me. Really, why did she think pink paper would work, I don’t even think red hearts papers would work. Well, who cares? I can just do my job and let Cam reject her. Ah, that’s some kind of plan. Not.
  “Ok, I’ll give it to him at the last period, I have the same class with him that time.” I answered, still staring at the note.
  “Yesim told him her name and her number, I think, she doesn’t even let me to read it.” Lotus said. She seemed know what I was thinking.
  “Can you just tell us the reaction when he gets this, then I can know if I got a chance?” Yesim followed eagerly.
  “Okay.” I answered sweetly, that’s me, nobody should angry at me, because I’m so sweet! Alas! I think I need some counseling.
  “Thank you so much!” Lotus said.
  “No prob!” I replied.

  It’s finally last period, so I can get over this quickly and go home, it’s Friday you know. Everybody loves it.
  I grew more relaxed this time; it’s not my note, why should I get nervous? I put a note on his table, “Here’s a note for you, not mine, of course.”
  WHY I’m telling him the last part of the sentence? WHO cares it’s not mine?!
  Well, Cam took the note from his desk, and read it in curiosity.
  “I need a word from you so I can tell that girl, or maybe you might think to write a note back.” I told him.
  “No, nothing.” He crunched the note and told me that.
  I looked him like I don’t believe this, “You sure that what you want me to tell her?”
  “Yeah, tell her that.” He answered blandly.
  “Okay…” I replied sarcastically and start doing my homework.
  But something strange just happen, I just saw out from the corner of my eye, Cam put the crunched pink note in his jean pocket. Then I stared him curiously. He quickly turned around and then pretended to do his homework. Yeah, like I didn’t see that move, I will definitely to tell Yesim that.
  Just then, I saw Shirl stared me at a moment out of her corner of eye, seems like she doesn’t approve me talking to Cam. So what? I can do anything that I wanted, why you care? It’s just talking, nothing else. I turned away from her and keep going my homework.

  “Really, you sure he just said that? But why did he say that?” Yesim asked urgently.
  “I’m positive. But I think I saw he put that note into his jeans.” I clearly avoided saying “the crunched note”, well, that don’t know that anyways.
  “Really? If that’s it, I still have a chance then!” Yesim answered happily.
  “Ok, then. I got to go, see you guys!” I said to Yesim and Lotus.
  “Wait, Ivy, where do you live?”
“Oh, I lived in 220 Clearance. Why?” I answered.
“That’s wonderful! I just lived in an apartment beside yours!” Lotus nearly yelled happily.
“That’s good, so we can walk together!” And I’m feeling cheer up in days.
Ha, I don’t have to stick with Shirl anymore! I got a new friend to walk to home and to the school with, wait till Shirl see that! Hehe.

2nd Story
On my way to the school this morning, (I didn’t walk with Shirl to school because she just phoned me that she needs to be early for her drama rehearsal. Well, who cares? I understand, she and Mel both have something important to do. I hate drama class anyways.) I found out that Lotus is in front of me, that’s funny, I didn’t know that. Well, so I called up on her and see what she is doing over this side of school.
“Hey, Lotus!” I yelled after her.
She turned around immediately and then she smiled, she waited until I got closer to her, and she said in a surprising tone “Hello, Ivy! I didn’t know you lived near here.”
I replied, “Neither did I!”
“If that so, then maybe we can walk together from now on.” She smiled.
“Okay! Since Shirl and Mel are busy with their rehearsals.”
“Really? What are they going to play for Christmas?”
“Well, I don’t know exactly, since we haven’t really talked in two days, they just decided yesterday. But I’m sure it’s pretty funny.” I assured her.
“That sounds so cool. When I’m in grade 9, I’m going to choose drama, too!” She said excitedly.
“Well, I’m not sure about that, so I didn’t choose it. But they still insist drama is pretty fun.”
The conversation about drama carried us all the way to the school.

Finally it’s lunch time, I got to ask Shirl and Mel about the drama play, because I so want to know, or, I’m thinking, maybe I can play a role in there, too. Well, I’m not joking, grade 9 Drama is usually easy, not as hard as the others. I know I don’t really like it, but since they are all in there, maybe I should try it, too. I put my lunch tray beside them at our lunch table:
“Hey, guys, how’s it going?” I asked them cheerfully.
“Ok.” They answered in a union.
“So, what’s the play you guys going to be in?” I asked again, cheerfully.
“Ah, that. I think we are going to use my script; it’s about an evil nurse and all the things that are happening in an evil hospital. It’s a pretty funny play.” Shirl answered as-matter-of-factly. We all know she likes to write, but I didn’t know she’s working on a play.
“Wow! That’s awesome! Can I be a part of it?” I asked carefully.
They suddenly stopped eating the sandwiches, and stared at me in a strange way.
“What? It’s nothing wrong with that?” I said innocently.
“I thought you hated drama.” Mel said, unconvinced.
“I did, but I can change my mind, right?” I exclaimed.
“Well, we have nothing to do about it, you can. But you need to tryout for it.” Shirl said.
“Ok, so what are the roles in there?”
“There’s the evil nurse, a evil doctor, an innocent pain patient that’s been tortured by the two evil persons, and there’s the relatives of the poor patient, and all the other person that’s the poor patient that once worked with.” Shirl answered.
“So, what are you guys going to tryout for?” I asked.
“Well, as for me, since I wrote that, I’m going to be the director and the evil nurse.” Shirl said proudly.
“I think I’m going to tryout for the poor patient’s dearest sister.” Mel followed.
“So, that leaves me, I think I’m going to be that poor patient.” I said.
“What?!” They almost yelled at me.
“I think I can do that, and you didn’t say it’s going to be a guy or a girl. But I think a girl would be more fit, because she’s been tortured, right?” I answered.
“Yeah, I know, but are you sure? It’s the lead role, and you are not in drama.” Shirl questioned.
“So? That doesn’t mean I can’t acting.”
“Well, you can always try, but if you don’t get it, don’t be mad at us.” Mel said.
“Okay, I’ll work hard for it.”
“I’ll give you the script at the end of the day.” Shirl said still unconvinced.
“Okay!” I answered happily.

Just after the lunch, I saw Yesim and lotus are coming my way. Oh oh. Are they going to give me another note that’s to Cam? I’ve been thinking about that role, and I forgot about the crush I have on Cam.
“Ivy, here’s another note for Cam.” Yesim said happily. And she hand me a note that’s neatly wrapped.
  “Ok, I’ll give it to him at the last period, I have the same class with him that time.” I answered, staring at the note.
  “Yesim told him her name and her number, I think, she doesn’t even let me to read it.” Lotus said. She seemed know what I was thinking.
  “Can you just tell us the reaction when he gets this, then I can know if I got a chance?” Yesim followed eagerly.
  “Okay.” I answered sweetly.
  “Thank you so much! When can I give you a sundae? ” Lotus said.
  “Ah, maybe later, I’m busy these days.” I replied. “Well, I got go, see you guys later!”
  “Ivy, remember tell us what his reaction is!” Yesim yelled after me. And as usual, nobody seemed noticed us.
  “Sure! Just wait!” I yelled at her and disappeared in the crowd.

  It’s finally last period, so I can get over this quickly and go home, because I need to practice my lines for the play.
I grew more relaxed this time; it’s not my note, why should I get nervous? I put a note on his table, “Here’s another note for you.”
  So Cam took the note from his desk, and read it in curiosity.
I can’t turn away yet, I need to see his reaction when he got the note.
“No, nothing!” He crunched the note and he got up, throw the crippled note in the garbage can.
  I looked him like I don’t believe this, “Okay…” I replied sarcastically and start doing my homework.
  
  
Oddly enough, I didn’t saw them after school, oh well, they might not really excited about it. Well, I don’t care. All I care now is how can I get that main role. Shirl and Mel are staying at school for the backstage scenes, I will just go home and practice myself, since I have all done all my homework. That thought carried me to my home all the way.
When I got my chips and coke, and then I thought, maybe I can practice my lines later, and I should get on the net to see if “Virgo” is on msn.
And I was right! She’s on there! But I saw she changed her name to “MeRok”. Really, how did she think up a name like that? Well, my name was pretty weird, too. It was “DramaSux”. Well, since I will be in a play (I’m really confident about I can get a role), I changed my name to “ILuvPlays”. Strange, isn’t it?
So then, we talked about why are we change our names, she doesn’t have particular reason for it, so I told her about the play thingy that’s going on:
MeRok: realy? that’s gr8! what R U going to play?
ILuvPlays: the main role, I hope.
MeRok: that’s cool! we got a play going on 2!
ILuvPlays: Gr8! U can be a part, 2!
MeRok: I kno, I want to be the second lead role.
ILuvPlays: good 4 U!
And then I told her about giving the note to Cam, she said that those girls are so unlucky, well, it’s not my fault he reacted that way. I’ve been thinking that I should tell her about I have a crush on him, since we are like best friends lately, and she’s in Toronto, there’s no harm done. So then, I told her about it. She was shocked to hear that:
MeRok: and U R still helping them?
ILuvPlays: well, yeah, that’s me
MeRok: but I think U should stop doing that
ILuvPlays: y?
MeRok: U like him don’t U? they R competitions, right?
ILuvPlays: they R my friends
MeRok: so?
ILuvPlays: well, U don’t need to care about it, I’ll still helping them
MeRok: if U insist
Well, is she right? I can do whatever I want, and I CAN stop helping them. Really, I should think about that…

啊~~~突然发现某可爱孩子的小说~~~:biggrin:
really a good one!
现在怎么都不写了?是不是所有的热情都会被淡化......

大哥，有中文的吗？小的才是小学生，英文功地不太牛