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I watched the sky and saw the star falling. Sirius, the brightest star fell tonight. I can’t describe what I’ve seen. I am too surprised to say a word. Isn’t Sirius a fixed star? Why did Sirius fall just like a shooting star? Is there anything wrong with my eyes? I turned around and hope to see him again. But nothing happened. I knew he’s gone.
I can’t believe that! My eyes are still on P711. I’m trying to find something else to explain it. He won’t die. He can’t die. I cry out. But every one tells me he died. So I suddenly see tears and his figure in his god-son’s green eyes. Then I feel something cold, wet and watery fall from my eyes to my heart.
A long time ago, I thought he was like a bright star in the night. But I’m wrong. He IS the star in the night. His name is Sirius. He’s Sirius. Sirius can’t fall because it’s the brightest fixed star. But he has been dead. How could it happen? He’s the godfather of Harry. If he dies, Harry won’t forgive him. Doesn’t he know his god-son, his friend and I will miss him? Every one who loves him will miss him.
Tonight, everything is black like his long hair. We will never have a chance to see his smile again, expect in the dreamland. Does he know we are heartbroken after he died?
I know it’s crazy to cry for a fictitious character. It is a made-up story. He’s a fictitious character. But I can’t stop my tears.
“Sirius.”
“Sirius Black.”
“SIRIUS BLACK!”
I call his name time after time. But there is no reply.


Harry heard Bellatrix Lestrange's triumphant scream, but knew it meant nothing - Sirius had only just fallen through the archway, he would reappear from the other side any second.
But Sirius did not reappear.
“SIRIUS!” Harry yelled. “SIRIUS!”
He had reached the floor, his breath coming in searing gasps. Sirius must be just behind the curtain, he, Harry, would pull him back out.
But as he reached the ground and sprinted towards the dais, Lupin grabbed Harry around the chest, holding him back.
“There's nothing you can do, Harry.”
“Get him, save him, he's only just gone through!”
“It's too late, Harry.”
“We can still reach him.” Harry struggled hard and viciously, but Lupin would not let go.
“There's nothing you can do, Harry. Nothing. He's gone.”
               From Harry Potter and the order of the phoenix, Chapter 35, Page 711

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[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

开学初的英语作业,老师给了不错的评价,只是不停跟我说不要总写那么灰色低调的文...语文老师也总跟我这样说...真够失败的...
请大家多多指教~

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

Really good, another 精华!!! Thanks~~~

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

帮忙．／．．．．．．翻译！

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

我望着天空，看见那颗星落下。天狼星，那最亮的恒星，在今晚落下了。我不能用言语来形容我看见了
什么。我已经惊讶到说不出一个字。难道天狼星不是一颗恒星吗？那为什么，它会像一颗稍纵即逝的流
星般落下？是我的眼睛出问题了吗？我转过身来，期望能再次看见他。但没有任何事发生。我知道他已
离去。
我不能相信！我的眼睛仍停留在711页。我正在尝试去寻找一些事来解释它。他不会死。他不能死。我
喊着。但是每个人都告诉我他死了。于是瞬间，我在他教子的绿眸中，看见泪水和他的身影。然后我感
觉到一种冰冷、湿乎乎的，像水一样的东西，从我的眼中，落下，滴在我的心上。
曾经，我认为，他就像天空中的一颗明亮的星星。但是我错了。他就是那颗夜空中的星星。他的名字是
天狼星，他就是天狼星。天狼星不会坠落，因为它是最明亮的恒星。但他已经死去。这怎么会发生呢？
他是哈利的教父，如果他死了，哈利不会原谅他的。难道他不知道他的教子，他的朋友和我会想念他吗
？每个爱他的人都会想念他。
今夜，一切都像他的长发一样，有着深邃的黑色。我们将永远也不会有再看到他的笑容的机会了，除了
在梦境中。他知道在他死后，我们的心已全碎了吗？
我知道，为一个虚构人物哭泣是件疯狂的事。这是一个虚构的故事，他是一个虚构人物。但是我没办法
阻止我的泪水。
“天狼星。”
“天狼星 布莱克。”
“小天狼星 布莱克！”
我一遍遍地重复呼唤他的名字，但是没有应答。


哈利听到贝拉特里克斯·莱斯特兰奇在得意地尖叫，但他知道这什么也说明不了——小天狼星只是跌进
了拱门里，他随时都有可能从另一边出来。
但是小天狼星没有出现。
“小天狼星！”哈利喊到，“小天狼星！”
他来到地板上，他的呼吸变成了灼热的喘息。小天狼星一定就在帘子后面，他，哈利，会把他拖出来…
…
但是当他来到石坑冲向台子时，卢平拦腰抱住了他，把他拖了回来。
“已经没有办法了，哈利——”
“抓住他，救救他，他不过是刚刚走了进去！”
“太晚了，哈利……”
“我们还可以抓住他——”哈利拼命挣扎，但是卢平不放手……
“已经没有办法了，哈利……没有办法……他走了。”
                               ——摘自《哈利波特与凤凰社》，35章，711页

他走了。

[END]
应所要求，翻译成了中文。不翻不知道，一翻吓一跳~~原来自己用英文写的东西那么没文采~~~为了保持愿意，也不好大幅度修改~就这样吧~笑~

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

恩,楼主也爱钢琴?

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

so moving
i wanna cry

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

[quote][b]下面引用由[u]紫無月珂[/u]在 [i]2003/12/21 00:11am[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
我望着天空，看见那颗星落下。天狼星，那最亮的恒星，在今晚落下了。我不能用言语来形容我看见了
什么。我已经惊讶到说不出一个字。难道天狼星不是一颗恒星吗？那为什么，它会像一颗稍纵即逝的流
星般落下？是我 ...
[/quote]
其实由于语言的差异，很多东西中文写起来很美，英文就不见得了，像中国的诗，翻译起来很搞笑的，所以，不要因为中文觉得自己的英文不好

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

6楼的同志，差不多算是吧。呵呵，最近迷上小提琴和钢琴的合奏。
中英文化差异的确是难以估计的，好像对英文，我就是没有那种感觉，文字的感觉。母语果然还是母语啊。

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

REALLY WELL DONE！

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

好PF 如果我也有这种文笔

[原创]Sirius, he’s gone

呵呵，还好吧。其实觉得英文永远无法用得比中文娴熟，毕竟是母语。
用英语讲话总得一个思考过程。