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My Family

There are there people in my family .there are my grandpa ,my grandma , my father ,my mother and I.
    My grandpa is a secretary , he is seventy-there year old . My grandma is a worker , she is sixty-seven years old .  My father is a soldier , he is forty years old .my mother is a manager , she is forty , Too . I’m twelve years old .
    I have an uncle . He is my mother’s brother . And I have a cousin . She is my uncle’s doughter .But I don’t have any brother and sister .
    I love my family !

My Family

Very good!~~~~you wrote it by yourself ,isn't it?

My Family

Really good~~~ You know you are so young and you can write such a fluent articel~~ really good~~~~ ^_^