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我的烤鸭作文(更新again again again!!!Version114！！)

[这个贴子最后由unicorn在 2003/08/22 10:35am 第 6 次编辑]

[size=5][color=#DC143C]声明:想在下面看到任何关于北京大烤鸭故事的人可以离开了，因为这完全是两回事[/color][/size]
Introduction:
烤鸭就是考ielts（International English Language Test Systems）,也就是雅思。大家可能对托福知道的会比较多一些，其实雅思也是这样的考试，只是题型上不同，还加考一门口语，以及该考试是针对想移民或留学去英联邦国家的人们的。Ielts分A类和G类，A类是为留学准备的，G类是为移民准备的，A类和G类在阅读写作题上不同，A类也要更为难一些，A类分越高越好，G类过了就行。
然后我要考A类，这几天天天写作文，因为这是我最弱的环节。每天2-3篇这样写，马上给你们看我的作文，你们慢慢理解。哦，对了，这些作文只是Task 2的，Task 1还要描写一个图表。全部在一小时完成。
写的蛮累的，如果这里也有要烤鸭的朋友，你们要是觉得好，大可拿去用，毕竟建立在题库上雅思考试，作文题都有关联，说不定就是同样的topic。不考的呢，你们想读就读，反正是挺无聊的，你们要是遇上morning report之类的懒得准备，瞧得起，也可以拿去。
造福人类吧我。决不追究版权这种事。lol
当然你要转到别的论坛去还是要和我说的~（笑）不过我看这p文章是没这么大价值的~
罗罗嗦嗦~~~你们看吧
不断更新！！！
[b]Version 109: Computer is widely used in education, and some people think teachers are not playing an important role in the classroom. To what extend do you agree?[/b]
Computer, which is the most useful and important tool in the information age, is widely used in people’s daily life. A large number of people think that computers will replace teachers in the future. But I don’t think it’s likely for it to be true.  
First and foremost, computer can’t run without a man’s prescription. It’s clear that it can’t solve the problems, which are raised by students. Suppose there is a question arises in study, a computer can’t answer it but keep showing what it knows instead. It’s absolutely bad for a student’s study, because once he has a problem he should be replied.
The second point is that a computer doesn’t have feelings and emotions, but these are necessary in communication. Communication plays an important role not only in constituting relations but also understanding each other clearly. How will the school be if teaching is without emotions? It will be dull and boring, and of course the students will grow up as cold creatures. School is a place to seek knowledge and also a small society for pupils to learn communication skills. It is what the computer can never do.      
Thirdly, a teacher sometimes can be students’ role model. But can a computer be pupils’ idol? Certainly not! It has no characters and personalities. It’s just a machine with a metal appearance.
Last but not least, a computer can’t deal with the accidents that happened in classes. It can’t arrange the students’ daily lives and can’t keep good order in classrooms. Students will make a mess if they are not in charge.  
In brief, computers are quite important nowadays but they can never change the education mode, which is leading by teachers. Though they are getting more useful than before, they still have some disadvantages.  (297 words)  

[b]Version 111: Which plays the major role in the development of personality of children, nature or nurture?[/b]
The process of a child’s growing is really amazing. It depends on many factors, such as the school, the society and the family. A child’s nature is just like the base of a building. It decides the way of his development. As for his nurture, it’s the architect. So both of them are quite important for a child.
Thanks to the subtle differences of genes, every person is not the same. When he first comes to the world, he is given a gift by the god. Maybe is the talent of art or a logical brain. These people may be called “Wonder Kids” while they are growing. Shirley Temple is an example. She was the angel in many people’s hearts, especially in the Americans’. Her great talent brought happiness to everyone. But not everyone is so lucky just like Temple. Although they have good nature, there always are a lot of demerits. Sometimes the situation is even worse. Well, nurture will help a lot.
From my point of view, nurture is more important for shaping of one’s characters and personalities. The environment will change a person’s mind and even his personality. Friends may change a pessimistic person into an optimistic one. Family may help a child to learn how to care each other. Also the nominees of Academy Awards are not born artists. Most of them attribute their success to the study and training. Einstein said, “Success comes from ninety nine percent of hard work plus one percent of inspiration.” This is the best sentence to describe how important the nurture is.
In conclusion, nature and nurture are both important to people’s characters and personalities. Nature without nurture makes one a no-man. And nurture without nature is like an tailor without cloth. (297 words)
[b]Version 108: Some people said the government shouldn’t put money on building theaters and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? [/b]
Education decides the future of a country and medical care makes a country stronger. However, what we need is not only the two things, but also enjoyments from magnificent dramas, exciting sports games and so on.
Theaters, which used to be the places only for nobilities, now become more and more common in the modern city. There are music concerts, dramas and other performances in the theater almost every day. Many people go there because they enjoy the atmosphere of a theater. They can have a rest while they are listening to the opera or watching the drama. Some schools also encourage students to go to an opera to enlarge their horizons. A theater also gives the actors a chance to perform on the stage and show a nation’s artistic talents and traditions to other countries.
For the one who need excitement, sports stadiums are the best place to go. Do you remember the scenes on the World Cup games? Everyone was shouting because they loved the competition. Here, they can set themselves free. All the stresses are away. It’s better than go to a psychologist to express their feelings and find a solution. Also sports activity such as Olympic Game is a good way for constitute friendship between countries.
Therefore, theaters and sports stadiums are quite important in people’s spare time. Life is a chain of moments of enjoyment, not only about survival. We need not only creature comfort, but also happiness in souls. It’s really clever for a government to balance the development of these two kinds of things.  (261 words)      
            
[b]Version 105: Some people claim that the disadvantages of cars are more than advantages. Do you agree or disagree?[/b]
Some large manufacturer of cars says that their profits for selling cars are increasing these years. Because it’s very easy to get a driver license now and almost every family can afford one car. A man can go everywhere he wants with a car and it seems that people cannot move without a car. However if we think it over we will find out that a car has too many disadvantages.  
What will you hear most when you are in a public place? That is many people are complaining about no place to park their cars. And what will trouble you most when you are driving on the street? Traffic jam, of course! Too many cars cause too many problems. Pollution and accidents are the two biggest demerits. Exhaust gas from cars dirty the air and make people sick. Also accident is one of the biggest killers. An accident can change a healthy man into a person with disabilities and even a dead man.
Furthermore, some defects are hiding in the shadow that we won’t discover them until one day they come out by themselves. The effect for human’s health is an example. Many people depend on cars too much. They seldom take any exercises. Their feet are using for step on accelerator pedals and brakes only. That’s the reason for why there are so many fat people on the streets now. Fat can cause heart disease, hypertension and many other serious healthy problems.
On the whole, though cars are convenient and fast speed, we should not rely on them. There are too many disadvantages if we use it too much. It will be better if we know these problems clearly and use cars properly.  (285 words)

[b]Version 106:Some people say that people have the freedom to use tobacco. Other people argue that it should be legalized as other drugs. What is your position?[/b]
Tobacco, a magic plant originating in Mexico and now grown in many countries. It has caused many people’s death since its discovery. Tobacco became very popular worldwide now while modern medical research said it’s a very harmful plant.
Statistics show that every year smoking kills almost six times as many people as road and other accidents, suicide, murder, manslaughter, poisoning, overdoses and HIV put together. It’s clear that smoking has become number one killer of human beings for it can give off a kind of chemical, nicotine, which is very harmful to people’s health. Smoking not only causes harm to the smoker, but also the people who smoke passively. When a non-smoker and a smoker are in the same room, the smoke also comes into the non-smoker’s body even he doesn’t want this. And the effect on his body is the same as the one on the smoker’s body.
Another reason shows tobacco’s disadvantage is that tobacco contains additives, which help to keep the cigarette alight, which increases the risk of fire from cigarettes. It means that smoke sometimes become dangerous not only harmful to one self’s healthy, but also the public properties and much more people’s lives.     
From the threats mentioned above, there’s no doubt that why many experts suggest that the use of tobacco should be illegalized as other drugs. Some good attempts to prevent smoking and reduce the harm to people’s heath is useful. For example, in some countries, shopkeepers are not allowed to sell cigarettes to the under ages, because it is very rare for someone to take up smoking as an adult. Also it’s good for a under age’s growth.
Nevertheless, it is not easy to forbid smoke because the growth of tobacco and the popularity of cigarette. However, the government should try its best to reduce the total number of smokers.  (307 words)
[b]Version 113: Some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge but to give practical training, which benefits the society. Do you agree or disagree?[/b]
What a university student need now are not only theoretical knowledge but also some practical training. After their graduation they need to face the society, which is more difficult for them to survive than they expect. So they need to have some practical training that gives them a chance to test if they can use their knowledge.
But it doesn’t mean that theoretical knowledge is useless. From my point of view, theories are the basic subjects to be taught in universities. We won’t know what is going on and how it happens if we don’t know theories. When scientists want to invent something, they would think about the theories first, than it would be research and tests would come at last. It is theoretical knowledge that drives the development of technology.
However, universities have done a great job in teaching theoretical courses, especially in China. What they need to improve is give the students more chance to practice. Not all of the theories are right. Practical training may find out the mistake. Also, theories would never be testified without practice. With those brave scientists, we see the world clearly. Benjamin Franklin for example, he flied kites in the rain and found out there is electricity in lightning. And his experiments led him to invent the lightning rod, devise the theory of positive and negative charges.      
To make it simple, theories without practices is like a fertile land with nothing, and practices without theories is like a seed without soil. Only when they two combine perfectly, can theories last long time and a technology stands everlasting. (265 words)

[b]Version 114: People have different expectation for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, and some people rather than change the job frequently. Advantages and disadvantages?[/b]
With the development of society, we meet much more opportunities than what we did before. A variety of jobs are provided now. Many people choose jobs because of their interests or just for a living. And sometimes is the job choosing them.  
Someone who prefers to do the same job may be in two situations. One of them is that he is at the top of the company and earns a good salary. He doesn’t want to leave. The other one is he’s not in a good condition so that he can’t change his job. He just wants to survive. There are both advantages and disadvantages for this choice whether you are in which situation that have been mentioned above. You can earn a lot of experiences is one of the advantages. However, as far as I am concerned, the disadvantages should be noticed much more. The biggest problem is that he may lose the competitive mind. It’s horrible to lose one’s competitive mind in such a society. So does the creativity.
Then what about the one who prefers to change his job? He may feel the world is colorful and full of vigor. He can work in every area and enjoy the variety of jobs. But his life is not stable. Also his loyalty is doubt and his colleagues would think that he wants to reach for what is beyond his grasp while sometimes he just thinks the job doesn’t suit for him.
To sum up, people should choose their jobs carefully and also judge which expectations they want. To do a job is not to play a game. We must consider both the advantages and disadvantages. (278 words)

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也希望你们谁觉得有问题，指出来！我23号考试就指望这些文章拉！thx!

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恩……U感得不错……
[size=6]GOOD LUCK！！！！！！！！！[/size]

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U的词汇量蛮大的

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ielts?
how old are you?

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15啊~~~明年就要出去了~~~~
昨天晚上又干了一篇,最后就差3个字就250， 难过，早上起来补了10来个字~~~lol

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我昨天给爸妈翻译了一遍
最后的结论是：
他们说，你看看，中文都不会说了，有些词还要把中文意思查出来...
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快死了
晚上还要干两篇~~~
明天再搞3篇~~~
外加两篇150字的task 1~~~
晕死了
周六就考试~~~给我祈福把~~~
我只要6分就够了阿

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U很开心的说
明年就能出国，我妈妈出而反尔说好我考上市重点就去澳洲的
现在好了~~~~~要等到大学……

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不是阿~如果我考不上重点班我也出不去
不过现在看来是考不上重点班了~~~这几天看ielts都快死人了

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再就没有了~最后三篇我是用手写的，这样可以防止电脑的自动更正.再就是适应看守写有多快！确实是很快！20分钟搞定的~~~~~
yeah~~~
我还要接着写
写图表的速度还不够快~~~
8了各位！

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U分数出来了吗

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要等两个星期

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这段日子是不是有点提心吊胆啊

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嗯！！！非常！！！非常非常！
考不好对不起一个帮我很大忙得很帅的老外，还有我小姨，还有我妈...

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[这个贴子最后由kiwibird在 2003/08/27 09:24am 第 1 次编辑]

Hi dear
your writing is not bad :)
as a person who has passed the IELTS test
i must tell you that you should never use such sentence in your IELTS essay
[color=blue]"With the development of society....."[/color]
it is because that is a typical Chinese expression...and unfortunately it is wildly mis-used by Chiese students....
when i was in Language School....my teacher(they are IELTS examers) have told me several times about this mistake. the point is the meaning of "development"....it is not as such as what it is in our mind...
be careful!!!!
IELTS examer are sick of this sentence!!if you use it in your test,the only thing it can do is to make you mark down!!!!

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darling, why you tell this to me NOW?
i finished the test and i USED it in my exam!!!!
damn it!

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don't worry,
to Unicorn:
have you finished your exam?
how did it go?
you'll be all right,
I;m sure you will.
to Kiwibird:
can I ask you a question? where do you live?

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:)
Auckland
New Zealand
from the country where the lord of the ring was set:)

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cool~~~~
r u native there?