yccharels 2003-1-18 03:36 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
《再别康桥》
我是评记忆写下来的，大家可以补充。
Saying Good-bye to Cambridge Again
（再别康桥）
作者：徐志摩
Very quitely I take my leave
As quitely as I came here;
Quitely I wave good bye
To the rosy clouds in the western sky.
(轻轻的我走了，正如我轻轻的来；我轻轻的招手，做别西天的云彩。)
I can not sing aloud
Quiteness is my farewell music;
Even summer insects keep silence for me
Silent is Cambridge tonight!
(我不能放歌，悄悄是别离的笙萧；夏虫也为我沉默，沉默是今晚的康桥！)
Very quitely I take my leave
As quitely as I came here;
Gently I flick my sleeves
Not even a wisp of cloud will I bring away.
(悄悄的我走了，正如我悄悄的来；我挥一挥衣袖，不带走一片云彩。)
Cool 2003-1-18 04:09 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
WOW阁下的英语不错嘛！
candy糖糖 2003-1-18 04:42 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
我来试一下第2、3段（汗~明天要考试~所以……）
The golden willows by the riverside
Are young brides in the setting sun;
Their reflections on the shimmering waves
Always linger in the depth of my heart.
（那河畔的金柳，是夕阳中的新娘，波光里的艳影，在我的心头荡漾。）
The floatingheart growing in the sludge
Sways leisurely under the water;
In the gentle waves of Cambridge
I would be a water plant
（软泥上的青荇，油油的在水底招摇；在康河的柔波里，我甘心做一条水草）
:em20:
yccharels 2003-1-18 06:28 PM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
综合：
Saying Good-bye to Cambridge Again
（再别康桥）
作者：徐志摩
Very quitely I take my leave
As quitely as I came here;
Quitely I wave good bye
To the rosy clouds in the western sky.
(轻轻的我走了，正如我轻轻的来；我轻轻的招手，做别西天的云彩。)
The golden willows by the riverside
Are young brides in the setting sun;
Their reflections on the shimmering waves
Always linger in the depth of my heart.
（那河畔的金柳，是夕阳中的新娘，波光里的艳影，在我的心头荡漾。）
The floatingheart growing in the sludge
Sways leisurely under the water;
In the gentle waves of Cambridge
I would be a water plant
（软泥上的青荇，油油的在水底招摇；在康河的柔波里，我甘心做一条水草
I can not sing aloud
Quiteness is my farewell music;
Even summer insects keep silence for me
Silent is Cambridge tonight!
(我不能放歌，悄悄是别离的笙萧；夏虫也为我沉默，沉默是今晚的康桥！)
Very quitely I take my leave
As quitely as I came here;
Gently I flick my sleeves
Not even a wisp of cloud will I bring away.
(悄悄的我走了，正如我悄悄的来；我挥一挥衣袖，不带走一片云彩。)
梅林爵士勋章 2003-1-18 09:31 PM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
哇！！！是你自己翻译的呀？、?好厉害！！！！
candy糖糖 2003-1-19 05:04 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
er~还差2段呢~不能算综合啊~！
yccharels 2003-1-21 01:42 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
SORRY!
大家可以的话，发上其他几个段吧，我试着翻译
十娘 2003-1-22 06:24 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
根本就是翻译软件翻译的嘛！！1！
candy糖糖 2003-1-23 02:42 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
[这个贴子最后由candy糖糖在 2003/01/22 06:48pm 编辑]
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]女巫EMMA[/u]在 [i]2003/01/21 10:24pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
根本就是翻译软件翻译的嘛！！1！
[/quote]
he~Let me show you how does 金山快译 translate these sentences：
1.轻轻的我走了，正如我轻轻的来； 我轻轻的招手，作别西天的云彩。
I walked lightly, just as I come lightly; I beckon with the hand, make lightly do not the Buddhist paradise's clouds.
2.那河畔的金柳，是夕阳中的新娘，波光里的艳影，在我的心头荡漾。
The gold 柳 of that river front, is a bride in the setting sun, wave 艳 in the light 影 , ripple in my at heart.
3.软泥上的青荇，油油的在水底招摇；在康河的柔波里，我甘心做一条水草。
Oozy and last 青荇 , oil oil of show off in the water bottom;In the 柔 wave of the 康 river, I am pleased to do a water grass。
…………
Now ,you see , those above are just three examples~~
And I speechless...
candy糖糖 2003-1-23 03:01 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
That pool under the shade of elm trees
Holds not water but the rainbow from the sky;
Shattered to pieces among the duckweeds
Is the sediment of a rainbow-like dream?
（那榆荫下的一潭，不是清泉，是天上虹 ，揉碎在浮藻间，沉淀着彩虹似的梦。）
To seek a dream? Just to pole a boat upstream
To where the green grass is more verdant;
Or to have the boat fully loaded with starlight
And sing aloud in the splendour of starlight.
（寻梦？ 撑一支长篙，向青草更青处漫溯，满载一船星辉，在星辉斑斓里放歌。）
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OKay~ yccharels， I finally finished~!
Now these sections can be joined together~ :em20:
never 2003-1-23 04:22 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
英语水平提高了！
yccharels 2003-1-23 05:16 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
Thank you ,candy!
综合：
Saying Good-bye to Cambridge Again
（再别康桥）
作者：徐志摩
Very quitely I take my leave
As quitely as I came here;
Quitely I wave good bye
To the rosy clouds in the western sky.
(轻轻的我走了，正如我轻轻的来；我轻轻的招手，做别西天的云彩。)
The golden willows by the riverside
Are young brides in the setting sun;
Their reflections on the shimmering waves
Always linger in the depth of my heart.
（那河畔的金柳，是夕阳中的新娘，波光里的艳影，在我的心头荡漾。）
The floatingheart growing in the sludge
Sways leisurely under the water;
In the gentle waves of Cambridge
I would be a water plant
（软泥上的青荇，油油的在水底招摇；在康河的柔波里，我甘心做一条水草
I can not sing aloud
Quiteness is my farewell music;
Even summer insects keep silence for me
Silent is Cambridge tonight!
(我不能放歌，悄悄是别离的笙萧；夏虫也为我沉默，沉默是今晚的康桥！)That pool under the shade of elm trees
Holds not water but the rainbow from the sky;
Shattered to pieces among the duckweeds
Is the sediment of a rainbow-like dream?
（那榆荫下的一潭，不是清泉，是天上虹 ，揉碎在浮藻间，沉淀着彩虹似的梦。）
To seek a dream? Just to pole a boat upstream
To where the green grass is more verdant;
Or to have the boat fully loaded with starlight
And sing aloud in the splendour of starlight.
（寻梦？ 撑一支长篙，向青草更青处漫溯，满载一船星辉，在星辉斑斓里放歌。）
Very quitely I take my leave
As quitely as I came here;
Gently I flick my sleeves
Not even a wisp of cloud will I bring away.
(悄悄的我走了，正如我悄悄的来；我挥一挥衣袖，不带走一片云彩。)
Is it all right?
paypay 2003-1-23 06:35 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
用软件翻译的话，是不会有一点押韵的，也会很枯燥！！
搂住翻译的很好呀~~
有空交流交流，
我是BBS的翻译！
kiki 2003-1-24 12:34 AM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
YC,不错嘛，
yccharels 2003-1-26 08:04 PM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
来来来，刚才谁说的我用翻译软件？我凭的是自己的见解。
Cool 2003-1-26 08:22 PM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]paypay[/u]在 [i]2003/01/22 10:35pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
用软件翻译的话，是不会有一点押韵的，也会很枯燥！！
搂住翻译的很好呀~~
有空交流交流，
我是BBS的翻译！
[/quote]
哈哈!PAYPAY,多来玩啊!
noel 2003-1-26 08:40 PM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
翻得是不错，看看这个
http://www.diewu.net/yuji/zbkq.htm
yccharels 2003-1-27 09:28 PM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
晕倒~
OU金妮 2003-1-28 12:57 PM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
As quitely as I came here;
把HERE去了
更压韵！
芜菁甘蓝 2003-1-28 06:53 PM
[分享]我翻译徐志摩的诗（可能不太全）
[quote][b]下面引用由[u]noel[/u]在 [i]2003/01/26 12:40pm[/i] 发表的内容：[/b]
翻得是不错，看看这个
http://www.diewu.net/yuji/zbkq.htm
[/quote]
DOS~不过还是自己翻译更有意思