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【同人。】Hometown Sunset

It was the day he arrived from abroad.
‘Whatever are you looking at?’ asked someone in a low, feminine voice, ‘You have stood here for several hours.’
[i]The idyllic valley is as lovable as it was, but who is speaking?[/i] He shot a nervous glance at her who was gazing at him tenderly, feeling humiliated at once.
‘You must be tired, aren’t you?’
[i]It’s none of your business.[/i] He thought, becoming increasingly angrier for she stroked his hair slightly as if he was a poor pet. Meanwhile, he found it really sentimental to think that no one had paid attention to him for so long a day except this girl who he felt quite unfamiliar.
He looked straight in her bright eyes, assuming that he might find something special, but he was completely failed.
[i]She must have regarded you as a lost pet dog.[/i] He said to himself coldly, determined to ignore her.
‘Where are you from?’ asked our little stranger naïvely.
Here. He gave a little start, sighing in silence. This valley is where he buried all his treasures in and lost his entire dear ones… She knows nothing about it. She is so young that she might know nothing about anything during that war!
‘Oh, I guess you don’t want to tell me.’ Sitting down on the exuberant grass, she couldn’t conceal her upset. He suddenly felt sorry.
*
Beaky the hippogriff was still in the near forest where the Marauders used to hold their parties, looking at the reflection in the quiet river of its own.
*
‘My name is Pearl.’ After a few minutes, she carried on talking to him. ‘I will be eleven years old in an hour. I have been here for eleven years!’ She grinned happily, ‘you can’t be eleven every day, yeah?’
Of course not. He looked at her delicate skin, thinking it difficult to resist the temptation of touching it, and then soon realized who he was at that time. [i]She is young enough to be glad with a piece of cake and some gifts.
[/i]‘How old are you?’ said Pearl in a quite low voice, smiling. ‘You must be younger than me, aren’t you?’ She bent over and fondled him with her face gently. Probably feeling itch, she burst into giggles. Then he felt his mouth was filled with sweets unwillingly.
[i]I’m three times as old as you are.[/i] He tried to dispel the disconsolate thoughts, surprised feeling that this girl called Pearl was kind of pretty.
As a dog, he stared at her impolitely: She is of slim build, long straight blonde hair quivering in the brilliant sunshine. When she smiled heartlessly, her bright green eyes shining just like a vivid deer-it served as a remarkable reminder of Lily Evans, the girl chased by James for seven years.
Something occurred to him: A few wizards played in the Great Hall, brilliant sunshine streaming through the high windows on their young, smiling faces.
*
It’s hurt to recall the time they young. ‘Time softens memories.’ He remembered Lily used to that, but it had never come true.
*
There was a time in Hogwarts, that no one can plead ignorance of an outstanding student organization frequently referred to as Marauders, which was founded by James Potter, Sirius Black, Remus Lupin and the cute boy who could always smile his friends out of their sadness and misgivings, Peter– [i]Peter[/i].
His left cheek twitched dismally, he considering whether he should run away from the girl who was putting a small bouquet of wild flowers on his back. He was so distressed that he hardly noticed her statement.
‘You are unhappy… What has happened to you?’
In their days- he remembered- James used to say that he was unhappy. ‘What on earth are you worrying about?’ Asked the young, black-haired boy heartlessly, rumpling up his hair to make it even messier than it had been.
Much as they might pride themselves on their remarkable friendship-they thought nothing could ever tear them apart- they were no longer being together, for nobody knew his own destiny. He contemplated at the little stranger who was singing an old Christmas song in a low voice, recollecting the past of his own little by little.
‘Do you know… I want you to be happy.’ Said Pearl abruptly while he was trembling hugely- ‘I want you to be happy.’ Said Moony on the day they graduated with a smile. It was twenty years ago.
*
The dusk was about to fall. ‘Wait for me.’ He said to her and wandered into the lively forest, while Buckbeak was swallowing a few worms at a mouthful.
*
‘What a surprise, yeah?’ He stared at her rosy cheeks, smiling with delight and gratitude. ‘I’m Sirius Black, a wizard. ’Said the young man a little bashfully. ‘Nice to meet you here, Miss Pearl.’…
‘You are the same age as my father, but you look so tired.’ … ‘You can’t be a real prisoner! Why were you cast into the prison?’ … ‘But you don’t know where your friends are?’ … ‘Can I help you?’… ‘It’s unfair! There must be something I can do, for I want you to be happy!’… ‘Thank you, Pearl.’
‘Pearl, I have to go.’ In the increasingly duskier light, he suddenly felt what meant ‘Time flies.’
‘Try to be happy, will you?’ She asked sentimentally, giving him a forced smile. He bent over, wanting to hug her, but to his surprise she suddenly jumped to her feet and kissed him on the emaciated cheek.
He stood in a trance until her slim figure disappeared behind the blue hills, looked a little depressed but fully hopeful. He was happy, for Harry his godson, who might have a close resemblance to Prongs, was waiting for him in Hogwarts School, and they would probably live together in a few months. Why wasn’t he happy?
Lifting his head, he pleasantly felt surprised that it was an exactly familiar sunset.
*
It was really the time to go. After shooting a glance at the blooming trees, the colossal hippogriff flew up into the lurid sky.
*
Raindrops came pattering on the windowpanes, with the rosy petals fluttering in to the moist atmosphere. Pearl White waked from her dewy slumbers.
Looking out of the sodden window, she saw a man wearing a marble face who stood in the garden towards her room. It was impassible for her to give a satisfactory explanation for she found it hard to let her attention wander. He turned back, giving himself an elegant smile, than suddenly transformed into a black, bear-like dog, his attractive lyart eyes glinting. She ran out of the house…
The sun soon dispelled the thick fog.
‘It’s amazing!’ yelled young Mrs. White, her eleven-year-old daughter humming a lively tune in the next room. ‘Don’t you think it is!’
‘Oh my darling…’ said the man in the sofa in surprise. ‘You are older than to believe a dog can talk, aren’t you?’
‘Of course I’m old enough.’ answered his wife coolly. ‘Despite all the traditional conceptions, you can’t conceal that it’s sounds like an exactly true story!’ She appeared to be excited, her face turning red swiftly.
‘Young kids always have a luxuriant imagination…’
No one noticed, a handsome, tawny owl flitted over the blue sky, a yellowish envelope tied to its legs, addressed in emerald green ink:
[b]To Miss P. White
Godric’s Hollow
From M. McGonagall
Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry[/b]


[b]-The End-[/b]


                                                                                                                                               [b]Finished By July
                                                                                                                                               2008-3-21[/b]

[[i] 本帖最后由 笙散 于 2008-7-9 05:27 PM 编辑 [/i]]

阿笙在你这个年纪英语就算相当好的了。我很汗颜很想死。

阿暖你可能真的比我大不了多少。而且你总是能够那么轻易地让我羞愧。
暖是初二不。
假如是我就真的可以爆了的说。

我英语比你烂一万倍词汇量小得我整个人要扑倒了……
……我才是看到你就感到羞愧的人……

你们这两个互捧的家伙……我这个正在奋斗GRE作文的人才是最汗颜的……

我。我我。。。我。默然。
怎么我发个沾满了水渍的帖子暖和三叶都来了。
于是我决定发奋图强地把这滴水调包了~我周末来写，英文同人~
让同人的风雨来得更xxxx些吧——!——^ ^
[u]----------------------------------------------------[/u]

于是我开始挖一个独特的坑。
一星期填完吧。
在肆安和忆合的影响下用英文写同人，一种尝试。

笙。上。

[[i] 本帖最后由 笙散 于 2008-3-8 01:23 PM 编辑 [/i]]

那个。。。你这个谢绝评论是不是我该删我自己的帖子了。。。。
看来祖国的未来是光明的~~~ ^-^

调。
hui姐我的谢绝评论已经解除了，呵呵。

转眼间我成了姐姐辈儿的人了。。。。
真的很强悍呢，在初中就能大胆的写同人，英语水平肯定不浅~~~~
佩服ing~~~
我帮你改了一下格式，这样比较好看一些~~~ :loveliness:

更新，依然很少，不过前面的有改过。
结尾已经写完了，第一次用英文写比较正规的东西，有点小兴奋。
这周末完稿吧。
我是不是应该想办法把它折腾到图书馆去？困扰。

我也有些困扰地说，不知道以后这种帖子放哪里。。。
嗯，我继续等，加油啊~~

a!
KT我等着你的千字。
等着我的ATLS

啊………… 竟然变成了一只狗。。。。。是不是变不回去了呢………………
我继续等…………

写完咯~眯眯笑!!
某笙的第一篇英文同人小说热乎乎地出炉~
自己还算满意，ho-ho！
不过的确写得比自己想象的要辛苦。现在终于完了，我先闪~

那个女孩Kissed him！
那个~笙好强（自愧不如中）！
我依旧，依旧没写完。呜呜。

啊啊，对不起啊，现在才看见……
我现在有点晕……这个是写在Sirius死之前么……………… 还是死之后变成了一个灵魂以后，还是别的什么……

来来，姐姐我给你个精华作为奖励，很强的人呢，真得很厉害，我到现在还不知道emaciated是什么意思……只知道怎么读………………
看来我该多读读书了。。。:poor:

嗯那个是写Sirius死之前的事情啊，游过大洋刚回到英国的时候，去Hogwarts之前先到Godric看下吧。Pearl White，那个小女孩儿是Muggle-born，她的父母本来不相信魔法，可是Pearl遇见Sirius的当天就收到了Pro.M的入学通知书。本来是用中文写的文，写了一百多字之后觉得有点闷，就改了英文~“From abroad”的原文是“从大洋彼岸归来”，应该就显得比较清晰。
Emaciated我记得是JK用过的词啊~形容Sirius的脸颊，大概就是“瘦削”什么的吧？难道我拼错了？某人狂奔字典而去~ {=。=}
……一秒后奔回来，谢谢hui姐加精~然后再次奔字典而去~~~

啊啊，不谢…… 不过应该是我朝字典奔去吧………… 只是我太懒了…………

啊，笙你写完了？
说实话，看完我都要哭了:cry: 。。。。。。我的英语啊。。。。。。
那个，膜拜一下:beg: ，然后狂补英语。。。。。。
PS恭喜一下，你的又一篇精华。。。。。。:clap: