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为庆祝哈7三周月——On the Road to Heaven(有Sirius,James,Lily,Remus...)[更新完毕]

第一次尝试英文同人，望大家指教。+`ET"}#t6@%R
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'|.H K/B+V A;g 1.Long Long Ago
A;DkLt} q#K They said they were together,Up d4Kusrp2n
After all those days in the moonlight,ubD.pwR^V"j
Transforming and wondering around in Hogsmeade.*X^!JkY jQ,oS7EC
There reflects four long shadows- on the ground.
]4sb:a;_g^Ks They thought they would be like that for ever,
M-]3?k:iBH\ Until one of them fell in love with a girl.
!e Y+nQ8l v}Y The girl was nice- 'course she was nice,E*@ P.a7W-^5X
They got married, and had a child. Zrx0EH4r
This shall be a good ending- you may think,

V$|iw3x$} But thing weren't like that for ever.
:~pV~~9?YI The couple were killed by a wizard,,{`/l'\t:f"r4LE
The three who left cried with pain- at least it seemed like that.KA
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But, it was said that one of them betrayed the couple,;F;G-Tt9f,s;Q
Which caused the death.
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~tSJ.m!R His name was SIRIUS BLACK."j"^([!F.C]9E_-]7k4K
Black was sent to Azkaban while another friend2p`6`Fr"^&W}
Peter Pettigrew was dead when he tried to kill Black.1pd#?kg~ [;j
This was the day they began to fall apart.{}w mPR C
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To be continued--3De-d)~;vy7Nv!O

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又是to be countinued，郁闷啊~|0r0W P+VqT
不过好快啊，刚催完就发了。恩，不错~继续继续，英文的风格很好，就是情节发展的太快了吧？

不要听Sun某人胡说，我不想写长篇啊。
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没有没有，纯属个人意愿啦~继续继续，短篇我也顶！

某天蓝你过分吧~我的沙发~忆合小朋友还是这么少啊~加油哦~

某忆合我很郑重地说现在还不到三周月，没有你这么隐藏沙发的吧~并且不许在帖子里暴露某S的个人信息~你可以编辑成Sun么~我不管你~某忆合的英文写作还是在我可望而不可即的远方~某天蓝我的沙发沙发沙发沙发~
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+Bk?b0p.[V [[i] 本帖最后由 肆安 于 2007-10-18 09:04 PM 编辑 [/i]]

咳咳，不用吧？某SUN已经怨念一整天了，就不要玷污哈爱这纯洁的地方了吧？
'Kn-v%P(@0a PS不是把地板和地下室都给你了么？知足吧？房顶这最后一个位置我就不客气了啊:lol

2. Sirius Black
r.Q$@H!tgh3\ It was calmer than ever in the next few years,7y.~5b)?1qn
People were out without protection,
:mqP5_O(j Me Because the Dark Lord had gone.
|"|s3X;R+HR Everyone looked happy and cheerful,

o4}&d\Q%sk1? Except the prisoner Sirius Black.
k'c!Q A/[ Actually Black was awake,
EAvK8B-{k jC&r7C Even though the Dementors were surrounding him everyday.zB+C#yQ H'O S0S&d(w
He could remember everything,(Zy!B.c X3UB
Especially James’s note in Godric Hollows:DM5I(ax#Kb,Y)U4u
I’ll be back to thee.4cu:X"OSs~;J2{-_
His mind was clear, and it was important,
k@_vaW&[ZO2N Because he was the only one who knew the truth.l(fF/w(~&? l~a

^o n9y4W 3. Out of Azkaban
lz`"PE,R0~0it Black was out of Azkaban.
V/BUR9Xl No one had ever escaped from Azkaban and no one knew how Black did it.
+S1[U z5G:n8W|&? The Ministry was searching for him, but he wasn’t found.
@Dt.g_MT5f Everyone thought that-`em`%KU.?1utp
Black was after the child Harry Potter.
:kKfU'D8T But they didn’t know one thing:
?9H c.|'l(r-iV.L/^ When the dusk fell, Black appeared as a man,|*g9LWv_%hW
When the sun rose, Black appeared as a dog.
Kh]7V2w1} A Black dog.zTc;F2?,R6Z
Fluffy,
c}6nMC l-V@G But sharp.-n"d,u |7Z"D
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4. In the Shrieking Shack7B%V;G%rB!W E
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‘Remus, I’ve caught him!’@DyU7^$bqS,}-w
‘I know.’
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c6ZW_'r5j         ‘James, Remus is a werewolf.’
V-J/],JJ#x-D9Bc         ‘I know.’:Ues){gmW
        You always knew, didn’t you?
mxY2}%~Mle!n ‘Let’s kill him.’'x-[$`bou
‘Right.’
#W/rL {F?7{b ‘No!’8J?(u~g&p
Sirius turned, looking disappointed and surprised.
$[!i4MLGX]P,JQ ‘Harry, this man is……’
*x T:Mg/X9v ‘I know who he is. We’ll send him to Azkaban.’tW,f8s-d#C
Sirius stared, than smiled.
,V0f/h4~ F| This means- Harry would have a godfather; Peter would be a prisoner;
Qq ~@B)}E%r And he……
u7BI }5Y He would be with Harry, James’s son.
"OT0R@!V[e It’s too good to be true.
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To be continued--

Sofa~写得很好呢，支持哦~我冒着被灭的危险上哈爱~2^CL{[-oiA C+G
建议哈爱以后专开一个英文同人版面，在现在的图书馆英文内容似乎看的人都不是很多啊~

其实用英文写得也不错啊!!~!~@!#!@!#!

期中终于考完了，可以放松一下了~
[,j1v!bpf4ix+z 大家不要着急，正在KEY IN。

这就叫另一种形式的沙发~忆小朋友我等着你的第一你的100你的棒棒糖~

为了某人急切地等待，先更新一点好了。
(|[9[,[)xd6a 5. Thinking Alone)GS.{/h(Yd O
‘Go,’ Said Sirius, pointing his wand at Peter.
/n`6eL*C ‘Don’t send me to Azkaban! Please!’ Cried Peter.
2q1T.O%up5@:_] Sirius didn’t say anything, and went out of the Shrieking Shack.
L4a(u7E"jD*@ He breathed the fresh air, with the smell of grass and earth.
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It was familiar, everything was familiar.
u b:W r3t5E'\ The moonlight, the smell, the view……
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‘Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!’
"yuc3a9S.[ Somebody screamed, Sirius turned quickly.
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n$ma"K)J.E3I Remus was growing larger and larger, there were long nails on his fingers and toes,
W;X` CwZ fp His eyes were full of blood.4N`!b6{BKxa6O m
Remus transformed to a werewolf.
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接着发完~
6o)nD4l/m/Q7] 6. The Escape$gY3W9do.s[
‘Remus, you’re a man, not a werewolf!’
|)[ O D'H Remus didn’t seem to hear him, but yelled.
"\+nb d{'r(A2iB His wand dropped onto the ground.
-dQk~%D#Q It meant that Remus didn’t drink the potion!q_p!G@
Sirius transformed at once.
sD!{~x ~%I He fought with the wolf, but that didn’t affect him.H*D4p/CxS0`
‘James, why aren’t you here?’JSeX@z
He thought, and then heard:F*F4Z}o)cvb
‘Sirius, Peter has Gone!’
pe#N(O:MG He shivered, and then ran down to the lake.~Y&Xas+N
The water was clear.Ci0gJi
He could see his face, which was once handsome.
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W$[ He sighed, but wasn’t sad.wR'RVaOhk
Suddenly, the water changed into ice.
UYH@ ^ B,Q He looked up, and then trembled.+O!I`t`x:R%k(\d
Dementors were there, surrounding him.
2?U;M:N}7Z3K         Sorry, James, I didn’t kill him.
B7WFkQ%U `         The man who betrayed you.
+E5s5h,wSq4WbBg2y Sirius fell down, his eyes full of tears..ojxItP(i
He closed his eyes.
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7. At the Department of Mysteries6P3h.s4|"h"t.h+R$h
He was laughing at her.
3NB5GhuY U,h ‘C’mon, you can do better than that!’ He yelled.
,xr-r\Ct The second jet of light hit him, squarely on the chest.
~p6fL}~ The laughter had not quite died from his face.
-]~(ALGq His eyes widened in shock.LBq@M+o }3Wi p
        How could she do it, how COULD she do it?
K/th@;~"G V/A/n It’s like an age for him to fall down.
IYI]qt;ltaK With his body in a graceful arc.9F&wt4g,tL Eakl:^
He turned his head, tried to look at his best friend’s son for the last time.[FtR5bC-K
But he couldn’t.4n2H2\Er&A
‘Sirius!’ Yelled Harry, ‘SIRIUS!’-N#L*EgGwC.SG
        Sorry, Harry, it’s over.
#rOczD-UEx These were the last few words he could hear.
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8. Being Together
z!L,Nj*U'a He fell down, without feeling painful.-CN/f1nuU
He was surprised, but not sad.
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‘Ah, you are a Black.’sn6BD_ ]#I'[
‘Hey, Sirius, let’s be friends.’(w9h(jU[#A1t@/c
‘Remus is a werewolf, let’s help him.’,oY+s2hCn*bf4yPL
‘I can transform!’:S4s.gi7N!O z
‘Yes, I do love Lily.’
PB@"r0C ‘Please trust me, I’ll be safe.’
#JxTn P4\.LYlTSU&H ‘I’ll be back to thee.’
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But where are you now?X/|fp9L
He fell down, but smiling, happily.
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l His handsome face shone with brightness.Yd-T |O"G U\n
‘James, we’ll be together again.’
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很快就会发一篇叫做Inconsolable的文（为纪念BSB今年夏天的复出），大家慢慢等。
)I9D$NOj P.S.本文灵感来自：
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/bI]"s.A9`7c [[i] 本帖最后由 忆合 于 2007-11-8 09:10 PM 编辑 [/i]]

Sofa！Such A Splendid Sofa！Excited~

虽然是英文，但
3~\4HmqM 还是，很不错的~
sK:P+GiJR+Q P.S.强烈建议哈爱看一个英文同人版面！

那个啥,痕迹啊...
.R1x#D%V/`{6Ln'd[S 我是不是来晚了?不过各位英文都好强啊~

不错不错，可是看不懂:badgrin: :badgrin: :badgrin:

真的加精了？[忆合+shine]的组合还真是强大~
xY3Q:@ZCF_o 不过本来就是很好的文:kiss: ~
3T!W;o;F,NN?3U1t} Shine你也过来给我译一下吧，笑~