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[RL/SB] But You Didn’t[Finished]

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[font=Arial][size=5]I stood in our Hogwarts[/size][/font]8~}!p})BG@xft
[font=Arial][size=5]Looked at the forest remote from the fighting[/size][/font]
a3G7{LX/s#o5AZ [font=Arial][size=5]At last[/size][/font]
1tA*]_o [font=Arial][size=5]I thought about our lives[/size][/font]w9P2[zqx G |
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| d3yiuI{ [font=Arial][size=5]When we were really young[/size][/font]
!FN&^SU+xS [font=Arial][size=5]We met on the express[/size][/font]"AVE5f6n
[font=Arial][size=5]You were tired and I were in quite shabby dress[/size][/font]
q4qS5n]K#]k3z [font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might ignore me or laugh at me[/size][/font]2}7\'P"dW}IJ3Hz
[font=Arial][size=5]But you didn’t[/size][/font]f@3Z.ka`F%jo
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[font=Arial][size=5]We were in Gryffindor[/size][/font]
@-U^`P2[I0uX7Ay [font=Arial][size=5]You were the bravest man I had ever met[/size][/font]
_Y$G$Hhr(X6a%T [font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might be too proud to talk to me[/size][/font]
B-Ww6zA S)v+j}gk&n [font=Arial][size=5]Because no one had been your friend[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=5]‘Marauders’[/size][/font]K9s8Y8UK
[font=Arial][size=5]Four eleven-year-old boys called themselves[/size][/font]
d$?8T"[(fE$Y3dcS [font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might think[/size][/font]2Ty&t!Y~
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[font=Arial][size=5]The autumns were boring and we were childish[/size][/font]`pMVgm
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[font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might suspect me of harbouring malicious intentions[/size][/font]#pk
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[font=Arial][size=5]Or you might be angry[/size][/font] tI-wy0BPEY
[font=Arial][size=5]That I didn’t tell you anything[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=5]I told you that you shouldn’t[/size][/font]
x!c,s\m.l [font=Arial][size=5]Put yourself in danger[/size][/font]h9t`8`XaF2_]
[font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might agree with me and[/size][/font]_fgIc?kP
[font=Arial][size=5]stopped to practice-[/size][/font]
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[*hT ngw [font=Arial][size=5](You cried loudly, ‘Remus, you are such a fool!’)[/size][/font]
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0z8?FMI [font=Arial][size=5]We walked in the moonlight[/size][/font]
]N(s}Nw [font=Arial][size=5]Though we talked and smiled relaxedly[/size][/font]
5HMX:c?k0R [font=Arial][size=5]When the moon was rising I hurt you[/size][/font]
mP+w}8}wjMQ [font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might keep away from the strange boy[/size][/font]:Y-j&g1}*yW{
[font=Arial][size=5]But you didn’t[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=5]The twinkling memories danced in the Forbidden Forest.-----------------------------[/size][/font]Jn^e#T*PL]5o
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[[i] 本帖最后由 肆安 于 2007-10-22 06:55 PM 编辑 [/i]]

-To Be Continued-'Y @ {O;g[1I s0U
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某S的英文不是很好。
XzwWjd'P X N 但是，为了一种氛围和热爱吧。sOA4v_
请耐心读完。T,RelD
我们一起加油。

好！（请想象幼儿园小朋友甜美的声音~~~）i$Vw,u{0L9LVI
快写啊，还有，希望看到XXXX的发表。
~"Uu\d$`B}%Tt7M PS总该加点正式评论——词汇不错，比我强（汗），感觉也不错，但是——你;) 真的确定把它归为亲世代吗？真的很像（注意“很”这个字）很像隐天路。。。。。。

肆安在英语写作？Good try，如果是我肯定没有尝试的勇气`Rq}P u6y_5G
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看过了，话说安似乎还是维持了自己的唯美风格，很文艺的路线~(^\M9^AB_mf1\+NA
我一直觉得用英文写诗歌性质的散文很难写，因为那毕竟不同于我们的语言风格，不容易遣词造句。L4Y%m1X{$dr!e
摊手，受CET一系列BT东西的毒害的我是写不出的，我现在一想起英文写作想的最多的还是三段论= =|||
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最后赞个~文风很值得保持，话说如果你有时间能把它发到“咱们的地盘”就更好了:lol
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a0D"ALu7j [[i] 本帖最后由 miaoqing 于 2007-10-17 09:41 PM 编辑 [/i]]

嘿嘿，你写的我看到了。#M%x?PO6K
等着三周月吧~
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[[i] 本帖最后由 忆合 于 2007-11-8 08:38 PM 编辑 [/i]]

那个，话说，3周月我也是一起等的，所以不要食言哦，某人~

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[font=Arial][size=5]Because of your haughty smiles[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might be weary sometime[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=5]Why I always misunderstood your words[/size][/font]

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[font=Arial][size=5]After a long time[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might cry[/size][/font]&r3h1UEZK?)p
[font=Arial][size=5]But you didn’t[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=5]‘Congratulations.’ You cried out with expression of happiness. That night[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=5]I thought you might believe me and calm down[/size][/font],^M|X7Al
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bR6E'@r#Ag9h'M [[i] 本帖最后由 肆安 于 2007-10-22 06:53 PM 编辑 [/i]]

写太好了~泪啊，哗哗地流~啥时候我能达到这境界啊？？？好吧。。。只要今天那个很XX的XX能够XX一点，我也就满足了。。。。。。
oU o3R SA-U` o0B PS继续继续啊~

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c@|e-_3g+y [[i] 本帖最后由 肆安 于 2007-10-22 07:00 PM 编辑 [/i]]

Finished!

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[font=Arial][color=#333333][size=5]There is going to be a splendid victory[/size][/color][/font]
I#Xe4o.s/| [font=Arial][color=#333333][size=5]But I don’t care at all.[/size][/color][/font]\_RR?_3b
[font=Arial][color=#333333][size=5]Sirius, there were still a lot of things we should do[/size][/color][/font]
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[-q] [font=Arial][color=#333333][size=5]But we didn’t[/size][/color][/font]#eH})s!c%f8I${
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[font=Arial][color=#333333][size=5]-The End-[/size][/color][/font]
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N%N#Q9W6{"X#yK$z [[i] 本帖最后由 肆安 于 2007-10-22 07:03 PM 编辑 [/i]]

周末出问题了吧 。q"k2GjT|
恩，这篇总算完结了，字体有点儿别扭，建议改一下。g/azbz"D
PS标题前面的图标是什么？在图书管那个页面可以看到的那个。