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我的英语报刊选读作业 与哈利波特有关

[size=2][size=2][size=2][align=center][align=center][size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b][size=10]What Will Be The Last Harry Potter Book[/size][/b][size=10][/size][/font][/color][/size][/align][/align][size=3][color=#000000][font=Gulim][size=10][font=Times New Roman]I love Harry Potter for almost five years , obviously it is not a short time since it cost one fourth life of mine .I love the characters, the plots ,the books ,the movies ,and of course ,the magic[/font][/size][/font][font=宋体][size=10]！[/size][/font][font=Times New Roman][font=Gulim][size=10]I know the Harry[/size][/font][font=Gulim][size=10]Potter has became a worldwide publishing phenomenon, it has been translated into many kinds of [/size][/font][size=10]languages ,and its author----J.K.Rowling wins both reward and lots of money . [/size][/font][/color][/size]
[size=10][size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Next year we will have the 7th and the last book , Harry Potter And Deathly Hallows. It is said that two or more than two main characters will die when they defeat against the Lord Voldemort , Harry might be one of them .I hope Harry can scarify his life to save others ’ and die heroically .At least ,the whole Harry Potter story need a complete ending.[/font][/color][/size][/size]
[size=10][size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]There might be eleven key words to explain Harry Potter ’s magical world:[/font][/color][/size][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]1[/b][b].Teenager[/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Teenager is the most important period of our lives .The author Rowling wanted to write the Harry Potter series from 11 to 17 originally , children become adult during the time .We are growing up while Harry growing up too. We also feel perplexed,impatient,but it is necessary that we must experience . [/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]2[/b][b].Hogwarts [/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Hogwarts is real home of Harry ,and also the only place where Harry can feel warm .In Hogwarts ,he found friendship which he will cherish forever ,he has his goal in the future ,meanwhile he can show his ability and testify himself .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Of course Hogwarts was also a great ,ancient magical school ,in it , a large number of mysteries haven’t been explained .Hogwarts is the beginning of everything ,maybe everything will be end in it .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]3[/b][b].Courage [/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]The symbol of Gryffindor is the courage . Anyone who has enough courage can be allowed into Gryffindor .Not only Harry but also Ron , Hermione ,Neville ,even every member in the Order of The Phoenix show their courage in the book .Also we ourselves have to live though there might be many difficulties in our ordinary lives .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]4[/b][b].Friendship [/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Once up a time there was a trio in Gryffindor .It is so warm when I first heard the name , filling of sweet taste .Every time Harry begins his adventure ,his friends ,Ron and Hermione will be his supporters forever .Although sometimes they have divergence ,difficulties , they realize the importance of friendship for themselves in the end.[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Time fly , but the only unchanged thing was the purest friendship in the Hogwarts .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]5[/b][b].Saving [/b][b]-[/b][b]People [/b][b]-[/b][b]Thing [/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]This is the words that Hermione said in the fifth book ,when Harry was eager to save his godfather no matter what would occur .At that time ,Hermione told Harry ‘Don’t you think you are a little Saving -People -Thing ?’[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]But it doesn’t mean Harry is willing to act a hero or wants to be a celebrity . that’s because he is so kind and doesn’t want to see anybody was hurt .As a result ,he has to protect everyone around him as far as possible ,although sometimes he was misunderstood by other people . [/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]6[/b][b].Defence Against The Dark [/b][b]A[/b][b]rt[/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]It is the course which always attracts Harry . It signify defeating the Dark Art. Every year teacher in this course would be changed because the position was cursed by Vldemort .So who will be the next teacher in this position in the last book and what will happen ? We all are expecting for that .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]7[/b][b].Love[/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Why Harry ’s mother chose to sacrifice her life to save Harry ’s ? That ’s because of love .The scar on the forehead of Harry is the sign of love which was carved by great maternal love .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]It is love that Voldemort cannot understand ,it is also the strongest thing in the world .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]8[/b][b].Dream [/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Everyone has their dream .Without it ,life became dull and dry .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]In the series of Harry Potter ,the dream was first mentioned by the founder of Slytherin ,whoes dream is eliminating all people who don’t have right to learn magic ,it means those who have mixing blood origin ,and set up the pureblood world .His descendant Voldemort also insist in purging blood origin ,on the contrast he himself also is a half blood ,that may be the reason why he live in a paradox made by himself .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]And what is Harry’s dream ? Perhaps just terminate all the things ,live as an ordinary people ? [/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman][b]9[/b][b].Memeory [/b][/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]When Harry was infant ,his parents were killed by Voldemort ,so the memory about his parents was so little ,however, it become the source of power in Harry ’s body ,depending on it ,Harry can control so many difficult magic curses ,defeat voldemort again and again .[/font][/color][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]These are memories in people’s brain ,which influence the past ,result in the future .[/font][/color][/size]
[b][size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]10.Love[/font][/color][/size][/b]
[size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]Most of people don’t think the theme of Harry Potter is ‘Love’ , Maybe it seem be in poor taste if I describe the whole book as love ,but I was touched so many times by the Love between Harry’s parents[/font][font=宋体]—[/font][font=Times New Roman]James and Lily .I can understand the happiness and [size=10]affection[/size] of them by those depictions which were depicted slightly and subtly. The wedding photo on the photo album of Harry’s parents testify their love at every time .[size=10][/size][/font][/color][/size]
[font=Times New Roman][size=3][color=#000000]Undoubtedly , the youth must experience the severe test of love as they grow up .Our Harry has learned something from the failure with Cho Chang ,hasn’t he ? While all the fans are waiting for the final arrangement that who Harry’s girlfriend will be by Rowling .[/color][/size][/font]
[b][size=10][size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]11. Magic [/font][/color][/size][/size][/b]
[size=10][size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman] Is it necessary to waste time ?[/font][/color][/size][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][size=10][font=Times New Roman] Broomstick ,Porkey ,Potion ,Spell ,Owls ,Hogwarts ,Qudditch[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10]……[/size][/font][size=10][font=Times New Roman]that’s the Harry Potter ’s magical world .[/font][/size][/color][/size]
[size=10][size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]   Do you believe in Magic?[/font][/color][/size][/size]
[size=3][color=#000000][size=10][font=Times New Roman]   Yes[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=10]！[/size][/font][size=10][/size][/color][/size]
[size=10][size=3][color=#000000][font=Times New Roman]   All of us are expecting your identical and resounding answer forever! [/font][/color][/size][/size]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 bloomoon 于 2007-3-18 10:09 PM 编辑 [/i]]

这篇文章真得很不错！文采很好~虽然有一些细微的错误，但是读起来很顺口~

[[i] 本帖最后由 JUNEYEAH 于 2007-1-27 02:04 PM 编辑 [/i]]

细节上有点问题那。

是Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows

Saving-People-Thing. 哈，以前没注意过。罗琳阿姨最喜欢发明创造了。

确实写的不错啊！

请问，为什么认为不是我写的呢，理由是什么，我想知道，
这是一篇摘自《电影世界》的文章，但原文是中文的，我为了作业，可是一点点译出来的，而且事实上，我只是用了原文的标题（原文是16个小标题），一一对应翻译is impossible 所以我真的不是随便转的

原文贴在我的空间  [url]http://bloom-chang.spaces.live.com/[/url]

另外，感谢仔细阅读我文章的人们，
gracias
merci
a ri ca do ……

各各英语水平都很高呵~楼主也不要太伤心~~是你的标题给人以一种错觉~~~:)

抱歉，语法、措辞错误真的不少。小字没看，大字里面就不少错
I love Harry Potter for almost five years , obviously it is not a short time since it [color=Red]cost[/color]（costs) one fourth [color=Red]life of mine[/color]( of my life).
中间应该加and以构成复合句，否则就是破句了。

I know the HarryPotter has became a worldwide publishing phenomenon, it has been translated into many kinds of languages ,and its author----J.K.Rowling wins both reward and lots of money .
这句也是同样的问题，phenomenon后或者改成full stop，或者加连词，或改成这样：
Having been translated into [color=Red]many languages[/color], HarryPotter has became a worldwide publishing phenomenon, and its author----J.K.Rowling wins [color=Red]great rewards---both in reputation and money[/color].

不过楼主费这么大力气翻译真是不容易，鼓励一下，继续努力：）

[[i] 本帖最后由 matrim 于 2007-2-3 11:46 AM 编辑 [/i]]

赞楼上～
写作中出错不可避免的，但总体来说写的很不错，楼主加油！
也期待大家能多提些具体意见～

多谢批评指教：）
不过我的作业啊 不知老师会怎样对待它 千万别让我不过阿 学分阿~~
改完的那句我很喜欢 一看就是很漂亮的写法
因为语法不好有些写法我不敢用 不过还是知道英语要写好关键在句子结构

各位多多指教阿~~

Brilliant.
不管有多少语法错误,这么辛苦译出来还是值得鼓励的.
LZ加油!