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My homework:My dream[推荐][原创]

[size=4][color=Red]             My    dream[/color]
[color=Orange]I am a girl,I have some dreams.But the dreams are not the same as others.Others' dream are lofty ideals,ambitious plans,but mine are just dreams,some wonderful dreams.
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[color=Green]I like imagining.One of my dream is I could went to Hogwarts School Of Witchcraft And Wizardry.I became the student of its.I  went to the King's Cross to take Hogwarts Express which took chirdren to Hogwarts.Certainly,before going to Hogwarts,I went to Gringotts,where had my own money.And then,I would be taken to Diagon Alley by Floo Power.There were many things:Broomstick,Parchment,Wand,Work Robe and so on.Afer that,I went to Platform9 3/4.
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[color=Purple]When I arrived at Hogwarts,I entered the Great Hall.There was going to be The Sorting Hat's Branch Test,and I would be branch to Gryffindor.I would be the friend of Harry Potter,Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger's.We had classes together,there were Charms Class,Defence Arts Of Black Magic Class,Potions Classand so on.We did our homework in Gryffindor Common Room.We had Quidditch on the Quidditch Pitch.We had our Christmas Party in Great Hall.We would find some books in Library.And,we went to Hagrid's Hut to watch Hagrid.How wonderful
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   [color=Pink] Our headmaster was Albus Dumbledore.He was a kind headmaster.We respected him.And Minerva McGonagall was our headteacher.She was a good teacher.But Professor Snape,was a bad man,we hate him.Besids,there were many intereting people,such as Fat Lady,Moaning Myrtle,Nearly Headless Nick,Peeves
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[color=Brown]LordVoldemort,the worst wizard in the witchcraft world.He wanted to kill Harry Potter.Some-day we would killed him some-how together.We must defeat his Black Magic with our wand and our spell.We must be triumph over
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[color=Red] This is my dream.It is so sweet that I hope it come true.I like witchcraft so much!I want to use it help the world![/color][/size]

[[i] 本帖最后由 feiqiou 于 2006-1-17 18:18 编辑 [/i]]

[color=Green]终于有用了！！！！！！！！！！！！！[/color]

蛮棒的……相比之下，我的那一篇就有点不能见人了。哈！

谢谢评价！！
感谢！

编辑了下
很棒的哦
加重了呢:)
bty,a wonderful dream!

真的很不错～～～
再多一点就可以加精了

[b][color=Teal]就给我弄成[精华]嘛[/color][/b]