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                      QBs：Harmly and Useless

Many OICQ comsumers are have more or less QBs.What is QB? QB is a

product of Tencent company.You canbuy QBs on the school shops or

stands.For example:If you want to buy ten QBs,you must pay ten yuan.So

QB's value equals the RMB.But the QB only can buy things that you never

use it in real life.So,infact,QB means nothing.

  But Tencent company have a bad idea:They let all OICQ comsumer's

QQShow to male and wear noting in addition to underwears if you never

buy any QQShow.So BT!（←云式英语）Many people think their QQShows

are ugly so they by the QBs and use it to buy QQShows.But, QQShows

MEANS NOTHING,just like the king's new clothes.

  So,I want to warn all OICQ comsumers-----QB is hazard you wallet,it is

harmly and useless!

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(05/9/18)

                             Conserve Energy

                                                               By Ada←(就是BT虫子拉~)

  Nowadays energy plays an important role in economy. Gas is getting less

and less. Coal is becoming less and less... We must coserve those

nonrenewable energy such as gas and coal. Everyone knows coal was the

ancient plants which were buried underground. It cannot be reproduced.

  Energy is valuable. But, in contrast to increasing population, it is very scarce.

So we must conserve energy. For example, we can recycle papers; ride

bikes; drive less private cars... To put them into practice is not hard.

  If we never take measures to conserve energy. Sooner or later, human beings

will disappear on Earth. It is a  serious thing that we must take into

account.

[[i] Last edited by luxiaohui2 on 2005-9-27 at 16:31 [/i]]

汗


写的BT的说

我也觉得Q币没用~不过Harmly 嘛应该不会吧~??

楼主为什么如此激愤呢？这只不过是腾讯的一种营销手段，既然有人买就证明是有市场，有需求的，虽然我也不大喜欢这种做法。尤其是玩游戏的时候，那些用到道具的人真让人气愤。

嘿，我刚开始以为QB时quarter-back呢。。。

...Q币造成了贫富差距，我不喜欢。

所以反对...汗汗

QB是Q币？汗倒。。。偶还以为是。。。

真汗，偶从来没有一分钱的Q币~

觉得应该叫QQ Money or something。。。。

ti've more concerned about your grammar rather than the words, but it seems better than what i could have done,andyway, but just a little question, is your space bar broken down or something, there is some no-space-words in there.

我的QB都是别人送的~哈哈~娃哈哈哈哈~~~

dao~咱帐户里还躺着6.8QB呢

[quote]Originally posted by [i]何必有我[/i] at 2005-6-19 12:49 PM:
我的QB都是别人送的~哈哈~娃哈哈哈哈~~~ [/quote]

娃哈哈？又一个品牌代言人啊~

倒~娃哈哈~那是我的

我用QQ本来就只是为了和班上的同学联系，本来就讨厌这种花哨的东西，包括什么Q币。
除了QQ传东西比较快之外，其它没什么优点。
再次呼吁大家用MSN或者ICQ.

再说一句，
谢谢楼主的原创文章：）
FF好久没有这样的帖子了，
希望大家不要再发没意义的转帖，向楼主学习！支持原创！

小云子这片文章~~
FF终于有一篇我看的懂得英文了！！！

...嫂子
我以后专门把作文拿给大家看！

咳咳，小云难得来一次哦，欢迎！

...
汗汗
昨天晚上写了一偏作文
太烂了，就不好拿来丢人可~

[quote]Originally posted by [i]iamtina[/i] at 2005-6-19 12:39 PM:
ti've more concerned about your grammar rather than the words, but it seems better than what i could have done,andyway, but just a little question, is your space bar broken down or something, there ... [/quote]

= =

今天来FF翻帖子的时候看见的。

TINA说的有道理啊...支持~掌声~鲜花....

= =|||受物语的影响，咱确实8喜欢那个BT东西。汗...这是个很危险的习惯啊。改正改正。恩。

我就这么狂汗下去...饿....我觉得我应该免费给自己一打妖瞳SUPER CAPSULE...= =欠揍的虫子飞走咯~

hmm, edited some minor mistakes~~ mainly on the second one, though.


listing the major though:

[quote]Gas is getting less and less. Coal is becoming less and less...[/quote]

this seems like C-english, it just doesn't sound right. You could say it this way, "The natural resorses around us are getting less and less everyday."

didn't see u update until now~~ Good job! When I'm your age, I couldn't even write one~~~ =)

[[i] Last edited by luxiaohui2 on 2005-9-27 at 16:34 [/i]]